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No, in that case I think his confidence will last for the rest of his life.

This is a strange addition to the original. The suggestion that Garnet sees other seers as variables is very strange, as it would suggest that in the original, Garnet should have been all-powerful on Earth until there were other variables, the level of the path to victory. The reason is that Garnet's abilities are described as mathematical, and the difficulty of the problem of calculating collisions between two seers grows infinitely, as you foresee that I foresee that you foresee that I foresee ... The fact that Garnet can function under Diamond's command in such conditions suggests that without Diamond she would be millions of times stronger. Usually in such situations it is assumed that the seer will see the other seer as an ordinary person without foresight.

I don't think I can express my point of view with a poll so I'll just write it out. As for the main character, she seems more like a prop than an actor, meaning she's a circumstance that the other actors react to rather than the driving force of the story, there's not much to say about her. The only thing is, you really have to understand that from our perspective she's just lying around doing nothing most of the time, you can at least say that she's very busy studying and reprogramming her stone, although it's a long-term project and she doesn't necessarily make much progress, but the important thing is the details. Especially considering that she is a former human with human memories, inaction is illogical. Again, while progress doesn't necessarily have to be visible from the outside if you want to prolong her disability, you should include her perspective on the work she does so that at least the reader can see progress, otherwise it will feel stagnant. From the reader's perspective. Pryanka seems to have moderate mental health issues. It seems like there will be conflict once her husband notices how this is affecting his other daughter. So far, everything seems pretty realistic and doesn't break the immersion.

It's obvious. He won't give more than a million. Have you even read it? This record is a hassle for him, but he has already decided that he will not be expelled for it, and in this school, points are very important. He would rather deal with the problems the record will cause him than humiliate himself and give up so many points.

Keep going, this is even more interesting than your book. Although that sets the bar pretty low to be honest For others: Read "Broken Peridot", the story of SI who was reborn as a peridot in Steven Universe and cracked trying to reach the Earth. Currently rebuilding and reprogramming her stone to function more like a human. Highly recommended

I won't give you a single stone until you publish 10 more chapters.

Seems a bit forced, there are more subtle ways to achieve the same result. Ruins the immersion.

As far as I remember he was a student and performed a good luck ritual before an exam, then went to bed and woke up as Klein. He didn't work in IT

It's not about strength as such, but about mental strength. Because of the shortcomings of his technique, Orochimaru is very vulnerable to such things. As for the tailed beasts, they seem to be very vulnerable to illusions too, considering that Obito couldn't be stronger than Kurama when he controlled him. And it was a regular illusion.