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Shadow_XLLv49mth
2024-03-23 13:32

I really like it. The only problem I have is just how little use the system gets so much that it's almost like it's not even there for most of the story. I think it should be used more and use it on practical things like giving the MC a skill or talent like eidetic memory or something (Of course he would have to work for it). It was also a bit too slow paced during the visiting the family arc, but I think it's better now.

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