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Azerath
AzerathLv111mth
2024-05-21 00:32

Во первых главный герой тупой то есть он попал в новый мир и ничего не исследовал, хотя тут не было 2 мировой войны и это очен сильно бы изменила мир. но нет он отсталый хотя бы газеты прочесть не ? или это настолько сложно ? во вторых он просто так принял новых людей как семью даже не задаюсь вопросом или испугавшись хотя другая личность помогла но куда делся оригиналальная личность ? почему его мнение как будто забыли? или только чувства есть у 1 личности ? Раскрытие мира дерьмо полное как ранее писалась. Характеры так себе хотя не картонные но не описаны достаточно. Так что 1/5 !

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