Item: Group Chat in Douluo Dalu
Rating: 4
Author: DetachedDreamer

DetachedDreamerLv141yr

2023-06-03 08:59

The characters personalities aren't attractive at all. their backstories are seen through a delusional child so somehow they are redeemable lol and he lies his best to make us believe that. There is a lot wrong with the MC, the inferiority complex he has towards tang San, possibly all MCs is palpable. pretty sad because the story itself is unique enough and creative. I enjoy chat group stories and this is written well. Just couldn't knock it out the park with the characters. give it a chance before judging.

Group Chat in Douluo Dalu

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