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LaziestMan
LaziestManLv42yr
2023-04-06 14:51

i sewer harem is gonna ruin this fanfiction

Group Chat in Douluo Dalu

Kaoski
4.1
83 Chs

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InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

fix your grammar before you complain about Harem

2yr
26
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

Your logic astounds me.

InfinityAndBeyond:fix your grammar before you complain about Harem
2yr
10
Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5

harems are the best thing ever

2yr
11
General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3

Why? :v

1yr
General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3

Hee sewer

1yr
2
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

1yr
MrDoor01
MrDoor01Lv4

Dege nerate

Helios_Sol:harems are the best thing ever
1yr
1
Destroyer404
Destroyer404Lv14

1yr
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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

The characters personalities aren't attractive at all. their backstories are seen through a delusional child so somehow they are redeemable lol and he lies his best to make us believe that. There is a lot wrong with the MC, the inferiority complex he has towards tang San, possibly all MCs is palpable. pretty sad because the story itself is unique enough and creative. I enjoy chat group stories and this is written well. Just couldn't knock it out the park with the characters. give it a chance before judging.

1yr

Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

Short chapters composed of repeated system notifications, which are completely useless to story development. Dumb mc, characters- puppets. Djdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjjdjjdjdjdjddj

1yr
LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4

hello if you like novels then go read "I crossed over with Immortal System" i am sure you will like it

2yr
Ancient11
Ancient11Lv2

another harem with a stupid main character who behaves like a young master and immediately reveals all the cards and gives slaps in the face.

1yr
Ulescu_Mihai
Ulescu_MihaiLv5

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 Great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤

2yr
Rickyson
RickysonLv12

o MC e estupido, hip贸crita e imaturo design muito ruim ele praticamente n茫o se desenvolve talves no futuro melhore ou tenha uma reescrita o tema e os personagens s茫o novos no tipo Chat dimencional diferente de outras fic que sempre coloca os personagens pricipais, porem o autor escreve muito rapido o envolvimento como se estivesse com pressa de terminar,a qualidade da escrita e aceitavel, estabilidade de atuali莽玫es s茫o constante, eu particulamente nao vou ler nao gostei, mas tem gente que gosta ent茫o boa leitura.

1yr
Warren_Yanga
Warren_YangaLv3

another og mc hater lol bunch of simps................................................................................................................

1yr
LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4

is it Harem or single heroine or no love interest

2yr
TakeruNobunaga
TakeruNobunagaLv3

It's an ok novel to pass time if you turn your reasoning off, then why not. 5 stars cause why not, it did entertain me a little. sfaffafsggagssgaggssggaghhvshshsgsahhshshshshaahahsgsgsggsgagahashshshahahashddhshahhshsdhshhsahhddshhsshs

1yr
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