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Efthee
EftheeLv141yr
2023-06-02 11:03

I read through volume 1 completely. I liked the system and pretty much everything but this is just turning into a heavy harem fic where the chat system only summons girls and they will end up with mc sooner or later so there's really not much suspense, as for plot it's pretty much whatever is going in canon. summary- the fic is definitely not bad but it's quite generic in my opinion.

Group Chat in Douluo Dalu

Kaoski
4.1
83 Chs

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LaziestMan
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i sewer harem is gonna ruin this fanfiction

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

The characters personalities aren't attractive at all. their backstories are seen through a delusional child so somehow they are redeemable lol and he lies his best to make us believe that. There is a lot wrong with the MC, the inferiority complex he has towards tang San, possibly all MCs is palpable. pretty sad because the story itself is unique enough and creative. I enjoy chat group stories and this is written well. Just couldn't knock it out the park with the characters. give it a chance before judging.

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Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

Short chapters composed of repeated system notifications, which are completely useless to story development. Dumb mc, characters- puppets. Djdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjjdjjdjdjdjddj

1yr
LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4

hello if you like novels then go read "I crossed over with Immortal System" i am sure you will like it

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Daoist060193
Daoist060193Lv2

another harem with a stupid main character who behaves like a young master and immediately reveals all the cards and gives slaps in the face.

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Ulescu_Mihai
Ulescu_MihaiLv5

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

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Rickyson
RickysonLv12

o MC e estupido, hipócrita e imaturo design muito ruim ele praticamente não se desenvolve talves no futuro melhore ou tenha uma reescrita o tema e os personagens são novos no tipo Chat dimencional diferente de outras fic que sempre coloca os personagens pricipais, porem o autor escreve muito rapido o envolvimento como se estivesse com pressa de terminar,a qualidade da escrita e aceitavel, estabilidade de atualições são constante, eu particulamente nao vou ler nao gostei, mas tem gente que gosta então boa leitura.

1yr
Warren_Yanga
Warren_YangaLv3

another og mc hater lol bunch of simps................................................................................................................

1yr
LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4

is it Harem or single heroine or no love interest

1yr
TakeruNobunaga
TakeruNobunagaLv3

It's an ok novel to pass time if you turn your reasoning off, then why not. 5 stars cause why not, it did entertain me a little. sfaffafsggagssgaggssggaghhvshshsgsahhshshshshaahahsgsgsggsgagahashshshahahashddhshahhshsdhshhsahhddshhsshs

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