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Daoist_Cloudwalker
Daoist_CloudwalkerLv151yr
2023-10-06 10:18

author-San when doing dbz fanfic it is best to not give system or anything over powered the the power system in dbz is very powerful already you only need saiyan bloodline and ur mc good dbz is a martial arts manga/anime so it needs to be weak to strong with a slow burn otherwise if you just make ur mc insta op strong right off the bat what is the point of reading no stuggle,hardship and all that jazz

Saiyan Primal Ascension

Iros
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I'll keep that in mind, and no, I don't plan on adding a system.

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Hello, shameless author here. You're probably wondering why I decided to write this. Well, you could thank saiyan of the cosmos for that one. They had such an interesting story but suddenly stopped updating, which sucks. However, I plan to use some of what they wrote as a guideline while expanding on it. So any feed back and comments would be like giving a flower some water, in a sense I would really love them. Let's hope they come back at some point but never the less, I hope you can at least enjoy the story, even if the updates are not weekly.

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Roman_Legion
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TheWaffleMonarch
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Hey that's pretty good. pls don't drop....

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Milli_Hassan
Milli_HassanLv4

wow i really love it and the main character is nice but still love to fight

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Hmaster
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P_J_Sch
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I like this and the MC is Cool and dosent Rush it in the Training

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