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Iros
IrosAuthor1yr
2023-06-24 06:43

Hello, shameless author here. You're probably wondering why I decided to write this. Well, you could thank saiyan of the cosmos for that one. They had such an interesting story but suddenly stopped updating, which sucks. However, I plan to use some of what they wrote as a guideline while expanding on it. So any feed back and comments would be like giving a flower some water, in a sense I would really love them. Let's hope they come back at some point but never the less, I hope you can at least enjoy the story, even if the updates are not weekly.

Reworking/rewriting dbz

Iros
4.5
53 Chs

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Roman_Legion
Roman_LegionLv4

We will watch your career with great interest

1yr
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DabanCrow
DabanCrowLv14

Author could you please reply to this comment with the picture that you used for the novel cover. I cannot find it anywhere else. Thank you.

1yr
Iros
IrosAuthor

That picture is au generated.

DabanCrow:Author could you please reply to this comment with the picture that you used for the novel cover. I cannot find it anywhere else. Thank you.
1yr
DabanCrow
DabanCrowLv14

I understand that but I was checking if you had it saved before you uploaded it as the cover for your work here on Webnovel. Like do you still have it saved away in your pictures? If so please comment it so that we your readers can have it too.

Iros:That picture is au generated.
1yr
Iros
IrosAuthor

ah I understand now

DabanCrow:I understand that but I was checking if you had it saved before you uploaded it as the cover for your work here on Webnovel. Like do you still have it saved away in your pictures? If so please comment it so that we your readers can have it too.
1yr
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Star_Royalty
Star_RoyaltyLv15

author is there an LI? and if so who is it?

1yr
Iros
IrosAuthor

Ll?

Star_Royalty:author is there an LI? and if so who is it?
1yr
Star_Royalty
Star_RoyaltyLv15

love interest

Iros:Ll?
1yr
Iros
IrosAuthor

oh yes, I'm stuck between three people. but that's further down the line, like very far down the line

Star_Royalty:love interest
1yr
seirei_lina
seirei_linaLv14

Will this be a yuri fic?(please be so)

Iros:oh yes, I'm stuck between three people. but that's further down the line, like very far down the line
1yr
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Iros
IrosAuthor

I feel like people hate straight couples on this app

seirei_lina:Will this be a yuri fic?(please be so)
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1yr
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xNMRx
xNMRxLv14

Yeah NO, i have had enough of yuri. I really wanted to swear while typing this because the amount of yuri fanfictions is just ridiculous.

seirei_lina:Will this be a yuri fic?(please be so)
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1yr
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Iros
IrosAuthor

there's a crazy amount of them, honestly.

xNMRx:Yeah NO, i have had enough of yuri. I really wanted to swear while typing this because the amount of yuri fanfictions is just ridiculous.
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1yr
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Iros
IrosAuthor

new photo

Iros:ah I understand now
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1yr
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PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Lv4

I think my mc negs yours. (raises head in cockiness)

12mth
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Iros
IrosAuthor

oh? I take it you have a fanfiction? cause I'll be the judge of that.

PettiaMius_6689:I think my mc negs yours. (raises head in cockiness)
12mth
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PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Lv4

it does, I'm probably the only person on here that scales systems realistically, at least numbers wise, and yes, I have multiple fanfictions, only 1 being written now, the rest are discontinued.

Iros:oh? I take it you have a fanfiction? cause I'll be the judge of that.
12mth
Iros
IrosAuthor

yeah, I believe I'm doing a good job on scaling my story. Nothing to broken and it makes sense.

PettiaMius_6689:it does, I'm probably the only person on here that scales systems realistically, at least numbers wise, and yes, I have multiple fanfictions, only 1 being written now, the rest are discontinued.
12mth
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PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Lv4

i was joking initially btw about the better than you thing, just wanted to say that, also, your story seems fine to me, and lastly, stay away from my story, its mid as hell.

Iros:yeah, I believe I'm doing a good job on scaling my story. Nothing to broken and it makes sense.
12mth
Iros
IrosAuthor

to late lol.

PettiaMius_6689:i was joking initially btw about the better than you thing, just wanted to say that, also, your story seems fine to me, and lastly, stay away from my story, its mid as hell.
12mth
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Roman_Legion
Roman_LegionLv4

1yr

Daoist_Cloudwalker
Daoist_CloudwalkerLv15

author-San when doing dbz fanfic it is best to not give system or anything over powered the the power system in dbz is very powerful already you only need saiyan bloodline and ur mc good dbz is a martial arts manga/anime so it needs to be weak to strong with a slow burn otherwise if you just make ur mc insta op strong right off the bat what is the point of reading no stuggle,hardship and all that jazz

1yr
TheWaffleMonarch
TheWaffleMonarchLv4

Hey that's pretty good. pls don't drop....

1yr
Milli_Hassan
Milli_HassanLv4

wow i really love it and the main character is nice but still love to fight

1yr
Hmaster
HmasterLv3

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NightroPulse
NightroPulseLv1

Grammar is good and word count per-chapter is great. The plot is good and isn't just an insert with no changes. There's canon divergence and extra original characters. Overall, it's an interesting read. With it's originality and number of chapters + word count, it's one of the handful of upper tier SI/transmigration DB fics I've read. And I've read a lot of them. Though I've found the four star Dragon ball as a button, seemingly as some sort of medium to open portals to other universes (omniverse) to be kind of odd, instead of just opening the portal as an inherent ability. But it's the DB universe, so it's not that out of place. The Toriko universe also plays a huge role in this story, but not the main role. I, however, never watched/read Toriko, so there's nothing I can comment on in that area. There were some hiccups in terms of canononical knowledge, but the author has shown a willingness to fix such mistakes once pointed out. That's a lot more than I can say about most other authors that don't even bother fixing grammar mistakes when pointed out, yet have the time to thumbs up and or comment. [Ctrl]+[F] people, it's quick and easy. Don't let them pile up with the excuse for a rewrite which rarely ever comes about. Consider the experience of your future readers.

2mth
P_J_Sch
P_J_SchLv14

I like this and the MC is Cool and dosent Rush it in the Training

1yr
MeWomboUWombo
MeWomboUWomboLv14

Reveal spoiler

1mth
Fluf_Bacon
Fluf_BaconLv1

I thought this was a pretty interesting for a dbz story. She does travel to different universes and the 2 main ones in this story are dbz and the second one is toriko but it stays mostly in dbz.

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