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not to ruin ur parade but Miyata 1st fight pro thing happen when ippo joined so is he in next chap if so u going way to fast this is just constructive criticism nothing more I like how you have built ur mc so far
good till outing urself as reincarnation.
need more
u should have mc leave with Roberto 4 Brazil 🇧🇷 since he is lookin after the brat now.
need more 😫
kind of ruined the story with God guy
thx 4 the chap more plz 🙏
thx for the chapter