Item: Magic Man
Rating: 2.8
Author: crinix

crinixLv131yr

2023-04-15 15:20

I've read about 3 to 4 chp... couldn't read any further. There are just too many things going around and no explanation, like there is no MC background story for...it gives you the feeling like you are starting your story from middle of the book. I think MC already has a love interest and we have got no explanation how they met or anything, and the jokes are lame and MC can't even converse without joking around. Sorry not for me.

Magic Man

Monkey_Godking

4.2

189 Chs

Liked by 33 people

Replies11

Pendulum_Lv12

Give mine a try: Sword God Reincarnation: Takemikazuchi Tensei.

1yr

mowLv4

I was going to, but sadly its a multi reincarnaters fic

Pendulum_:Give mine a try: Sword God Reincarnation: Takemikazuchi Tensei.

1yr

Pendulum_Lv12

Is something wrong with multi Reincarnators?

1yr

mowLv4

It ruins fics for me personally, I only read your synopsis and if the actual book is anything like that then the book itself is probably good. So I'll atleast wish you luck.

Pendulum_:Is something wrong with multi Reincarnators?

1yr

MrIIIoLv5

a lot of webnovel readers want the mc to be the only unique one or whatever. There is nothing wrong with muli-reincarnators. It can be very interesting

Pendulum_:Is something wrong with multi Reincarnators?

1yr

Pendulum_Lv12

I'm getting the book contracted next week so with a larger reader base I'll see how much people don't like it. Multi Reincarnators is special to me lol, I just like the idea of it

MrIIIo:a lot of webnovel readers want the mc to be the only unique one or whatever. There is nothing wrong with muli-reincarnators. It can be very interesting

1yr

MrIIIoLv5

i'll give it a try when im less busy

Pendulum_:I'm getting the book contracted next week so with a larger reader base I'll see how much people don't like it. Multi Reincarnators is special to me lol, I just like the idea of it

1yr

Pendulum_Lv12

Thanks

MrIIIo:i'll give it a try when im less busy

1yr

AbyssalHungerLv14

The love interest is explain a little later and it’s pretty obvious what’ going on with the authors detail. I do think this review was unfair

1yr

AbyssalHungerLv14

I can see your point of view though

1yr

trueidiocy_577Lv4

There are some multi reincarnator novels that are good like maybe Villain Cultivator, because what cultivator doesnt reincarnate so basically everyone and their mothers are reincarnators

mow:I was going to, but sadly its a multi reincarnaters fic

1yr

Other Reviews

PoisontesterLv1

Man author really doesn’t want mc to grow up, everything in novel felt great but mc just have to be a idiot having no kill policy when his enemies are killing his students infront of him.

1yr

AarconReixLv14

readable but full of pot holes. . . . . . I mean, its alright 🤣🤣🤣

1yr

ntw_ffLv11

this story started off so good and was really looking forward to the rest of it and then the mc became a p***y out of nowhere and it completly ruined the story for me ...and if that was bad enough bringing hermoine to kamar-taj sealed it dropping this at chapter 54. it started good and just got worse as time went on

1yr

Tunic01Lv15

Basically the only thing this book has going for it is comedy and even that's starting to die out, so like the only reason I'm even continuing is it's Monkeys book.

1yr

CandyChopperLv6

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐ Total 2.8 This is just canon with extra character nothing changes author doesn't want to change anything major or small.

1yr

BalladLv5

Hm, Not gonna lie this is probably the worst monkey fic I've read. I'm just not vibing at all with this character he's a complete joke and not the funny one.

1yr

accidentaljihadLv15

Surprisingly good, the first few chapters are a bit confusing but not bad tbh, after that it really gets going and you find out more about the world in quite satisfying ways

1yr

Left_Nut_Of_MadaraLv13

While it contains the usual monkey biz our man shouldn't write any hero complexes anymore as his moral grey style bleeds through and just makes this an absolute irritant for me due to how conflicting his personality feels at times.

1yr

MR_DAVITALv4

i am very bad at writing rewievs, but this story is surprisingly very good. waiting for new chapters

1yr

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