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Alanray64
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2024-06-11 10:24

Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain. The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting. Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention. Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.

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Second Transmirgrator was a girl, in the current and past life, and it's a spoiler but she is in MC harem, not her having her own harem. Even if they talk about splitting girls, or any other talks, it doesn't mean, it will happen. Sometimes, what I write doesn't mean that will happen, that will not happen or something else happens. Just like life, even though you plan to do something but you didn't,

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