Although the MC is good , but how can one story have 2 mc , you are trying to create 2 mc , which is very for every Story .In any story there can be one mc . Other can be supporting characters or side characters

I haven't read the story, but when I read the synopsis, where the author mentioned that MC will not steal the others harem. So in this situation the author should at least have Little common sense, to keep a spoiler chapter where all the harem of our MC will be mentioned, so that the readers do not get confused at any point by mistaking someone else's women as MC's future girl, only for them to feel cucked later on. Stupid author

Well story seems to be good but since I don't like 2 mc setting and someone else having harem other than mc, I will not buy paid chaps iykyk. Anyway if you don't mind 2mc with each having their own harem then give it a try.

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Honestly I don't know how to describe this feeling that I am getting while reading this book but If I have to put my finger on it then it would be UNCOMFORTABLE I mean a lot uncomfortable 😖 At first it was progressing well and nice when there was only one MC but then came our OG and that's where I started feeling weird, How MC teaches OG to make his own harem and how he even helps him. And then when Ayumi (a sub heroine) came in the picture and that's where my patience wore thin. I mean just look at how our MC (he himself) helped her (sub heroine) realise her fetish (being cuck queen) with OG. In my opinion it would have been best ( at least better than now) if you have let OG's story progress WITHOUT MC interference at all if you really were trying to create two MC's kinda story tho it would have been perfect if there was only one MC. There are a lot other things I would like to say but I will stop here as it will discourage other readers To Author: A question for you, suppose you were a READER of this story (not Author), how do you think you would feel when you liked our MC (story wise) and Ayumi (literally) both, and suddenly there is a third person (OG) who f*** Ayumi huh?....I don't think it would be anything less for what I am feeling currently i.e., only if you don't have any weird fetish LOL Sorry But I don't think I can stay in this journey with you any longer tho keep up the good work.

From what I have read, this novel is unique, this novel has some dark things in it and reading that is not easy for the heart I am only reading this, so I can see Mc become a good person and save the heroinesBut if that didn't occur then I am dropping this

noice 🥵.. I read six chapters it is good . 18+ old readers recommended .. but update is slow, character is okay, world building okay but story is unique and interesting 😙

Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain. The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting. Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention. Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.

we simply just need more author morrreeee