Review Detail of JustReaddd in Mystic Fisher of the Lost Waters

Writing Quality is good, just add more monologues then it would be perfect. Update Stability has improved, compared to your last novel :). Story development until chapter 10 could be a little slower. Example write more about the trial, personally I think it was a bit fast but that’s just me. Character design is good. World background so far so good. The depth realm is well explained. He also has some unique powers which I have never seen before. But don’t make them too Op, because then it will get boring. I see you put some restrictions on his abilities which is good. I’m looking forward for future chapters:)