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Writing Quality is good, just add more monologues then it would be perfect. Update Stability has improved, compared to your last novel :). Story development until chapter 10 could be a little slower. Example write more about the trial, personally I think it was a bit fast but that’s just me. Character design is good. World background so far so good. The depth realm is well explained. He also has some unique powers which I have never seen before. But don’t make them too Op, because then it will get boring. I see you put some restrictions on his abilities which is good. I’m looking forward for future chapters:)

Nice chapter

Sad that you stopped writing the other novel. Though this one looks promising. Keep up :)

Wait fr?

They will probably get exposed in the test for the sword sect thingy

Not the captain. Anyone else is completely fine but not the captain

It has been like this since chapter 1

So slow upload time

Author is writing for his father surgery or something like that, I’ve read it Bedford somewhere. So I don’t think it’s gonna end soon. Things that we miss: -Who Ashlyn really is. -Backstory of Ashlyn. -The higher worlds -Titans -Somewhere in the novel it said that tyrants is just mid level strength in the higher worlds, so it’s a lot of ranks left. - Even those top from higher worlds is just a weakling to titans.

I think it’s a lot left. Even the higher worlds are just small things for titans