So far, so good. The writing quality is perfect, so much so that I haven't found a single mistake. Thank God, cause the majority of the authors on this app have abysmal writing. The character design is good as well. The only reason I only say is because I still don't know much about him, but that's understandable, considering that it's only the 4th chapter. That also goes for tue world background. But I don't think that one is as important as the others, as we all know about Marvel if we're reading this
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yeah I don't plan to read it just from the simple fact only an idiot would say nothing to one above all could ask for knowledge or regeneration or something
Do you believe that The One Above All (TOAA) would bestow upon an individual any power they desire without any drawbacks? It seems unlikely, as even entities like Eternity, who resides at the center of the universe and grants wishes like a genie, are not without limitations. From TOAA's perspective, the protagonist's life is akin to a reality show, with the ultimate goal being to watch the protagonist endure and overcome various challenges. This includes witnessing the protagonist struggle, suffer, and eventually triumph over powerful adversaries. If the protagonist were granted powers without any weaknesses, it would fail to satisfy TOAA's desire for an engaging story, as the protagonist would effortlessly navigate through most situations. It is worth noting that many individuals prefer stories where the protagonist progressively grows stronger, as opposed to starting off overpowered.
Gh0st00:yeah I don't plan to read it just from the simple fact only an idiot would say nothing to one above all could ask for knowledge or regeneration or something
too many have bad writing. although, to be fair, writing good takes a lot more effort. i got my own novels but didn't get far in chaps due to the amount of effort. I'll get back to them later
Just make sure to word your wish right and make sure there are no loopholes to exploit
AidenUsmani:Do you believe that The One Above All (TOAA) would bestow upon an individual any power they desire without any drawbacks? It seems unlikely, as even entities like Eternity, who resides at the center of the universe and grants wishes like a genie, are not without limitations. From TOAA's perspective, the protagonist's life is akin to a reality show, with the ultimate goal being to watch the protagonist endure and overcome various challenges. This includes witnessing the protagonist struggle, suffer, and eventually triumph over powerful adversaries. If the protagonist were granted powers without any weaknesses, it would fail to satisfy TOAA's desire for an engaging story, as the protagonist would effortlessly navigate through most situations. It is worth noting that many individuals prefer stories where the protagonist progressively grows stronger, as opposed to starting off overpowered.
in this case the author is god so what he says goes
Iron_Man_3000:Just make sure to word your wish right and make sure there are no loopholes to exploit
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AidenUsmani:Do you believe that The One Above All (TOAA) would bestow upon an individual any power they desire without any drawbacks? It seems unlikely, as even entities like Eternity, who resides at the center of the universe and grants wishes like a genie, are not without limitations. From TOAA's perspective, the protagonist's life is akin to a reality show, with the ultimate goal being to watch the protagonist endure and overcome various challenges. This includes witnessing the protagonist struggle, suffer, and eventually triumph over powerful adversaries. If the protagonist were granted powers without any weaknesses, it would fail to satisfy TOAA's desire for an engaging story, as the protagonist would effortlessly navigate through most situations. It is worth noting that many individuals prefer stories where the protagonist progressively grows stronger, as opposed to starting off overpowered.
