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shashank_bhattLv141yr
2023-04-29 03:03

The story is good and so is the character design. Though I think it would have been better if you directly transported mc to marvel without his meeting with God and him rejecting his gift as I think that makes the character unreal. Human by nature are greedy and there is no way someone would reject a leg up in a universe like Marvel that's what makes him unreal

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Kirozen
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agreed that should have been the case if you don't want cheat power, system.

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crazyspecter
crazyspecterLv14

the score is above average because I am being objective and the writing quality and world building and the updates are very good. The issue is in my opinion the multiple lead tag and most of all the author trying to pass it in his warning chapter as something marginal and that does not mean there are multiple mc in the story but it is fale. The so called mini-arcs for the other characters last 12 chapters of the 40 something chapters published till the moment of my review, in my book this is not a mini arc or at least something relatively small compared to the chapters dedicated to the Mc. Things will only become worse with extra characters and the author aim of 1000 and more chapters may end up with no more than 300 chapter from the pov of the Mc...If people want read so much about canon characters who are not Si or the supposed mc of the story they would simply read the marvel comics in my opinion. Adding an Oc supposed Mc and then giving him almost as much screen time as the canon characters/secondary characters of the fanfic, it is irksome like a fanfic with an oc mc who follow the canon mc and the likes. Still if you are not bothered by this it is a good read and probably even harem haters would like the romance since is not a pokemon one. Moreover the author is aiming for a realistic harem and since he is an arabic there is none better than them to write something like that since for them harem are legal and accepted even today, for sure they know more about the matter than any harem writing author or any hater who rant about how harem doesn t exist in real life so theybshould notnbe present in a fictional work xd

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