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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv31yr
2023-08-24 05:01

I don't want to offend or insult anyone it's just my opinion. The thing was good till chapter 70, when he returns to the earth he only do stupid things and whiteout reason,he save the life of a full team of a secret society who wants to kill him for example. It's just... The mc don't grow, just became more stupid and make worse desitions In conclusion the more you advance more stupid became the mc.

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Kotario
KotarioAuthor

They didn't want to kill him, only capture and he doesn't save their lives brother. He's trapped them on an iland in the middle of nowhere with no supplies until he can enslave them in the future.

Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

It gets way worse. Hus entire worldview is warped from that other universe and his own parents when they tell him to do bad things that he randomly enslaves humanity afyer killing 2 billion people to conquer them and makes AI take over everything including art, music etc. Humans arent allowed to do much except there assigned education plan and a few hobbies. Business and so on were abolished true communist style. Mc only needs 1 virus strong enough and his AI Controlled Human Slave Empire crumbles. He didn't attempt to properly do anything at all

Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

but he killed them all but one later

Kotario:They didn't want to kill him, only capture and he doesn't save their lives brother. He's trapped them on an iland in the middle of nowhere with no supplies until he can enslave them in the future.
Kotario
KotarioAuthor

How exactly is that bad?

Sean_Morabito:It gets way worse. Hus entire worldview is warped from that other universe and his own parents when they tell him to do bad things that he randomly enslaves humanity afyer killing 2 billion people to conquer them and makes AI take over everything including art, music etc. Humans arent allowed to do much except there assigned education plan and a few hobbies. Business and so on were abolished true communist style. Mc only needs 1 virus strong enough and his AI Controlled Human Slave Empire crumbles. He didn't attempt to properly do anything at all
Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

I've seen worse so its not that bad but I'm just saying I don't personally like it but I wont do any review or anything since thats my personal opinion and not really criticism of your book

Kotario:How exactly is that bad?
Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

The character himself I mean not you

Sean_Morabito:I've seen worse so its not that bad but I'm just saying I don't personally like it but I wont do any review or anything since thats my personal opinion and not really criticism of your book
yggthedude
yggthedudeLv13

If it's just your own opinion why are you doing a review? It's meant to criticize the novel based on the five elements you can choose when rating. All you're doing is negatively impacting the author's novel and then when he deletes these "reviews" and people complain it brings his novel even more down.

kentaro88
kentaro88Lv11

it's definitely bad, no. it's worst when you have mc like that. his mindset is like those Chinese who force labor and enslaved people in their so-called "reeducation camp."

Kotario:How exactly is that bad?
kentaro88
kentaro88Lv11

wow! you're actually telling someone what to do? it's an individual's opinion. besides, world background, and character design are all part of what he's commenting about.

yggthedude:If it's just your own opinion why are you doing a review? It's meant to criticize the novel based on the five elements you can choose when rating. All you're doing is negatively impacting the author's novel and then when he deletes these "reviews" and people complain it brings his novel even more down.
Kotario
KotarioAuthor

Did you read the tags for this novel?

kentaro88:it's definitely bad, no. it's worst when you have mc like that. his mindset is like those Chinese who force labor and enslaved people in their so-called "reeducation camp."
Zane_Tam
Zane_TamLv4

Yes anti hero not villain i like villain stories but this just ridiculous

Kotario:Did you read the tags for this novel?
Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

This is very true

kentaro88:it's definitely bad, no. it's worst when you have mc like that. his mindset is like those Chinese who force labor and enslaved people in their so-called "reeducation camp."
Generic_2300
Generic_2300Lv3

Honestly, I thought I Was the only one who noticed Sorry to say author ,but your novel has no substance. I initially enjoyed it because it felt down to Earth but his senseless rise in power and follow up actions are disappointing. I stopped reading around the chapter he said he wanted to strengthen his soul. Why? what's the point of all that power ? and why does he want to conquer the Enternal universe ? Everything the MC had done till where I stopped —like chapter 140 something— is completely meaningless.

Burntl1quid
Burntl1quidLv14

Galaxy Dev

Sean_Morabito:It gets way worse. Hus entire worldview is warped from that other universe and his own parents when they tell him to do bad things that he randomly enslaves humanity afyer killing 2 billion people to conquer them and makes AI take over everything including art, music etc. Humans arent allowed to do much except there assigned education plan and a few hobbies. Business and so on were abolished true communist style. Mc only needs 1 virus strong enough and his AI Controlled Human Slave Empire crumbles. He didn't attempt to properly do anything at all
Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

Why hello there

Burntl1quid:Galaxy Dev
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Kotario
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