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Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv121yr
2023-08-04 01:49

It would have been better to tranform a medival level cultivation world slowly into sci-fi direction . just like- " modern pathrich" or "dao of deal" type cultivation novel of royale road

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Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv12

Oh after reading only first chapter I got dissapointed .. mc father was well not drug addict ,a well known abuser , killed mc's mom and everyone know still no one ever called polish on him. not even mc thought of ever calling the cops... I mean if just start of the story have such a big plot hole than what could we expect later on from this story... same as every other chinese story - law and other was nowhare to be found in modern world and cops are never mentioned in any crime...

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mujaki2Lv15

I'm the next chapters super Saiyan style baby gets crushed by angry goddess.

Shivam_Thakur_1883:Oh after reading only first chapter I got dissapointed .. mc father was well not drug addict ,a well known abuser , killed mc's mom and everyone know still no one ever called polish on him. not even mc thought of ever calling the cops... I mean if just start of the story have such a big plot hole than what could we expect later on from this story... same as every other chinese story - law and other was nowhare to be found in modern world and cops are never mentioned in any crime...
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