Review Detail of An_Average_Author in Transmigrated Into My Sister's Novel

I like it! I like the vibe this novel encompasses with its descriptive storytelling and the characters that feel like real people. The descriptions are not too many nor too few; it's just right. The characters' dialogue feels natural, and like I'm in the conversation too. But every good thing has its cons- 1. A lot of grammatical and punctuation errors 2. Some things come abrupt 3. Dialogue is a bitt wacky at times. (doesn't take away from the story). Overall, you should give it a read!