Amera_Mee
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Amera_Mee6dCommentedSo a quick transmigration novel?
[Librarian's Gift (S): User will be able to choose a story from the 'Mental Library' which they would like to conquer. Once the choice has been made, the user will be transmigrated to that world, to carry out the 'Quest' conditions. In completion of all conditions set, User will receive rewards and return to their world. However, failure to complete the conditions will lead in punishments.]- Amera_Mee6dCommented
Indeed, so useless, throw it in the trash, highly recommend.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Amera_Mee6dCommentedAfter the Xandarians - an extraterrestrial race - had suddenly appeared on Earth, declaring war on the humans, large portals accompanied their arrival, called dungeons. The existence of the Xandarians had forced planet Earth to birth the magical essence known as Mana. These portals led to different dimensions where vast kinds of monsters resided; allowing these portals to remain open for too long would lead to dungeon breaks, letting these ferocious beasts loose into the world to wreck havoc.Â
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O0h, yeah, I do remeber now, Ash is a battle manic so the moment he started fighting at his fears disappeared. Should have made that part clearer.
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Im not sure, let me check
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Fumiko and Koi?
"Thank you, Miss Fumiko" As she cut the phone and walked towards Koi, who was waiting for her, she finally began heading to the directions as instructed by Miss. Fumiko and Koi thought, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
Roaring ? Why?
"Miss. Fumiko!! Where is the vegetable and meat section in the Supermarket near the station!?" Airi roared into the phone in a hurried manner, and Miss Fumiko, who was tucking her child to sleep, felt a sense of urgency as she asked, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
University repeated twice is awkward
"It is not that⌠actually, this is my classmate, who got late for admission and wasn't able to get his uniform from University. I want you to custom make a university uniform for him", Airi spoke as she presented Koi, and the shopkeeper's eyes shined, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
Ryu?
"I am sorryâŚ" he said in a low voice, and Airi couldn't help it anymore; her hand moved on their own as she patted Ryu, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
Not sure if I should laugh or cry
Airi, who was taken aback by Koi's sudden loud voice, felt taken aback. She was about to shout, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
Koi's gulping need to be in a new line.
"Oii, if you mentioned this to anyone at NGOâŚ. You know what would happen, right" Koi gulped as he remembered the conversation last night and nodded, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
Incomplete paragraph
'But you always scold me!!' thinking that, he moved his hand towards the wall where he saw what he thought was a switchboard. But before he could turn on the, - Amera_Mee11dCommented
How is it? Comfortable, right?
"How is it comfortable, right?" Airi asked. Her voice was lower than she usually speaks, and her body was filled with comfort to her core. Seeing her like this, Koi gulped a bit, but he couldn't deny the truth. - Amera_Mee11dCommented
Seeing repeated twice,
"Thank Lord; I was worried if you will speak in a normal voice level or not!!" seeing, and seeing her laughing, Koi felt embarrassed and asked, - Amera_Mee15dReplied to Iago_Cech
the text between 'these single brackets is a monologue.'
This paragraph has been deleted. - Amera_Mee17dReplied to Nitsuga_NiCh 10 Ice cream
- Amera_Mee28dCommented
Not bad, a good start.
This is the start! - Amera_Mee28dCommentedPrologue