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2024-06-21 06:21

The first few chapters were dam* interesting being a father and cute daughter who faced the unfortune of betrayel and died. Although he used his ' intelligence and insight ' to revenge instantly which later in the story vaporited and mc became dumb average. Anyway Everything is good after he transmograted, became demon and etc...the issue start after his daughter birth to another baron couple, when instead of the story should starts being interesting the author just made it bland. For one the mc just became... useless. He starts being highly emotional like some club dancer facing difficulties with her bf. his power and skills advancment came to a halt even though he starts building that useless army and what made all this boring? His thoughts process. Like bruh he can't even fight more than 3 on the same level as him(canon fodders in that world) yet he wants to take down gods? Like bruh the level gap in between is just crazy, next is the author focus...i believe like me many found it boring to have the pov changed on someone else for so long when the mc himself didn't have many time screen. Why would i care about reading 10 chapters about bunch of nobels and entrance exam when the mc himself isn't in that academy, for the daughter? It make it even more weird when she had new parents and you start introducing heug(or whatever his name) who is likely to be her bf when again...the begining should focus on the mc more and he could have disguised and join the academy to bring more chaos and train with their resources instead of ^i will make gods perish for puting me against my hero daughter and kill their devotee bla bla bla^. Overall a good start but i just found it boring to read about side story in the begining of the main one. A remake for this with more serious matter and a little twik in his personality and his daughter will make it way better. Instead of this wanabe demon emperor and army you could have him use that forest for far more improvement yet he just left after being a little strong. and more creativity on his chaotic core instead of thunder slash and fireball. Man that's long lol. Good luck

Demon Emperor's Rise: Becoming The Greatest Villain For My Daughter

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I will go out of my awkwardness and inferiority complex and say this, this book deserves my 5 star. I believe I will be able to captivate many people's heart. The starting journey of this book might feel slow to some people, I hope you can stick to it. Also, I will say in terms of writing skill, I might be the worst author in WN but I can say with a little belief my story telling capability isn't. And, last thing, Enjoy!

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