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hansora
hansoraLv141yr
2023-03-14 19:09

Sooo I can say that I like how the story starts. We get a few chapters that show Max our MC and his beloved daughter Ana in modern day, their previous life. I especially like what the MC plan for the organization he's quiting. The writing is neat and easy to understand. I really hope the author can make it big with this story. We'll see how our MC gets stronger with the system All the best author!

Demon Emperor's Rise: Becoming The Greatest Villain For My Daughter

StumblingtoSuccess
4.7
163 Chs

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StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessAuthor

Thank you! Love you for such a sweet review.

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StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessAuthor

I will go out of my awkwardness and inferiority complex and say this, this book deserves my 5 star. I believe I will be able to captivate many people's heart. The starting journey of this book might feel slow to some people, I hope you can stick to it. Also, I will say in terms of writing skill, I might be the worst author in WN but I can say with a little belief my story telling capability isn't. And, last thing, Enjoy!

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Sandwich_Author
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I have to say as a first review... This is interesting, sure it may be a topic people have already seen before but another perspective from another author is appreciated in making the case suitable. I hope other readers would take in the consideration of reading this work.

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PrinceClover
PrinceCloverLv13

Are you looking for a cold-hearted Main Character but gentle in front of her daughter? A supposed slice of life but with an interesting twist? A reincarnation in another world and reconciliation with her daughter? Come and read, and find out how Max would deal the problem of becoming a demon while her daughter is the future hero!

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SB_Moon
SB_MoonLv13

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Coolguy45
Coolguy45Lv15

TLDR: You should read this. Similair vibes as Custom Made Demon King but this book is all original - which to be clear is something good! (CMDK is pretty much a fan fic). So far it seems like the author has really put alot of thought into how the story will progress. The world seems very well thoughtout and a wide cast of characters has been introduced/foreshadowed. I am especially happy to see that the author uses time skips instead of filler to get through periods in which not much is going on. Keep up the good work!

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Dream_Seeker_729
Dream_Seeker_729Lv14

Looking forward to it ..................

1yr
raizell24
raizell24Lv4

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Leviathan04
Leviathan04Lv15

This story starts with a happy but also sad part and then blast off into a world of adventure and determination. The MC is very well written along with his relationships with other characters. There are some discrepancies in the writing i.e. missing a word here and there, sometimes spellcheck puts down a word that doesn’t fit the sentence but it does not make it difficult to read. Overall I’m happy I found this book and hope to keep reading it to the end.

1yr
LordSirius
LordSiriusLv4

This is a nice story. The plot of the story is interesting, I have no complaints about it. The plot of trying to kill a God to be with the mc's daughter is similar to the cliche of an mc trying to save/reunite with a love interest which I think is overused or maybe the ones with that cliche performed it badly but for this story I don't mind it. But, there are some problems like Grammer, where I'm confused at some parts. Another problem is that the mc doesn't seem to act like a middle-aged man and an assassin. He is an assassin but acts like a swordsman going head to head with his opponents. apart from the problems I said, this novel is a good one to read.

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