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Joe_Lomas
Joe_LomasLv42mth
2024-11-10 14:32

story starts good then goes to shit with promoting his patron like his other stories so not worth it

KRYPTONIAN IN STRANGER THINGS

Mr_Flash_XO
3.2
24 Chs

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Poet_man
Poet_manLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr

MangetsuTH
MangetsuTHLv3

An 18 year old guy reincarnates as a Kryptonian baby, at more or less 10 years old he beats kids until they bleed and then starts planning to make a harem of teenagers... Sound appealing to you?

1yr
Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

it's a good premise but in hindsight the execution was horrible cus the author clearly didn't plan that far ahead because now Nancy is 12 o that means Steve Harrington will also be 12 cus they are in the same year so what is the author gonna do about driving scenes cus 12 year old can't drive obviously and even in the newest chapter 11:the kiss it is stated that Nancy followed Barbara's car to school and the author also mentions that Steve Harrington confessed to Nancy so this confirms they are about the same age in the same year in (highschool?) (middle school?) it is unclear because the author doesn't say .

1yr
batman_3_3_
batman_3_3_Lv4

pedo author and mc, dude ages them down further to be even worse. and mc is nerfed to oblivion to a point that it's a joke dude asks for the best kryptonian bloodline but couldn't compete with any weak kryptonian and has to learn on a system defeating the purpose of the best bloodline part anything that u find dumb or illogical will just be passed off as au

3mth
Insert_Here
Insert_HereLv13

great job with the story i really like it so far

1yr
LastGod
LastGodLv5

At first was super hype. This seemed really cool and interesting. i mean a kryptonian in this universe is unique. Then he i kinda question why he working out insteadof just getting stronger by absorbing sunlight. i just thought oh well maybe hes just too young to be super stron maybe he can only lift like 1 ton right now. the he said he is only as strong as an adult but he has heat vision... which made me question what was going on. but i was still fine with that. the thing that almost broke me is the system that talks. but i pushed on.... the thing that made me drop it. is when the author work in a way to make him NOT a kryptonian. by making him a slim fem boy..... REALLY... just make him a freaking sayain if u want a slim guy like that u just basically made him not a kryptonian already. i understand u want him to look a certain way then find a super powered race that looks like that and use that race. This ALWAYS happen with kryptonians everyone wants to use them buy no one wants them to be riped huge dudes. WHY!?!? MAKES NO SENSE!!

2mth
Mr_Flash_XO
Mr_Flash_XOAuthor

My second fanfic.. hope it gets the attention it is worth of. Check my other novels too.

1yr
Matinsy
MatinsyLv1

Protagonista agressivo realmente n茫o 茅 de meu agrado, provavelmente me decepcionei s贸 com isso mesmo... 馃様

2mth
Grandsage_0257
Grandsage_0257Lv4

interesting and I'm looking forward to more chapters

1yr
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