At first was super hype. This seemed really cool and interesting. i mean a kryptonian in this universe is unique. Then he i kinda question why he working out insteadof just getting stronger by absorbing sunlight. i just thought oh well maybe hes just too young to be super stron maybe he can only lift like 1 ton right now. the he said he is only as strong as an adult but he has heat vision... which made me question what was going on. but i was still fine with that. the thing that almost broke me is the system that talks. but i pushed on.... the thing that made me drop it. is when the author work in a way to make him NOT a kryptonian. by making him a slim fem boy..... REALLY... just make him a freaking sayain if u want a slim guy like that u just basically made him not a kryptonian already. i understand u want him to look a certain way then find a super powered race that looks like that and use that race. This ALWAYS happen with kryptonians everyone wants to use them buy no one wants them to be riped huge dudes. WHY!?!? MAKES NO SENSE!!
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LIKEIt is a valid point. why ain't a Kryptonian bulked up, u ask. First of all, the bulk of the Kryptonian is because of their intense training. Although it wasn't shown in the movie or any TV series, Superman needed to exercise. in some of the comic he is shown to exercise for variety of reasons. And if u didn't like the system why even read this one? it is clearly on the tags, that this is a system genre fanfic. But yeah, again that's your own personal opinion, so can't argue