Item: KRYPTONIAN IN STRANGER THINGS
Rating: 2.2
Author: Jonathan_Lam_2034

Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv41yr

2023-03-15 12:34

it's a good premise but in hindsight the execution was horrible cus the author clearly didn't plan that far ahead because now Nancy is 12 o that means Steve Harrington will also be 12 cus they are in the same year so what is the author gonna do about driving scenes cus 12 year old can't drive obviously and even in the newest chapter 11:the kiss it is stated that Nancy followed Barbara's car to school and the author also mentions that Steve Harrington confessed to Nancy so this confirms they are about the same age in the same year in (highschool?) (middle school?) it is unclear because the author doesn't say .

KRYPTONIAN IN STRANGER THINGS

Mr_Flash_XO

3.2

24 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies4

Mr_Flash_XOAuthor

I didn't mention barb's car.. I think u r just thinking it similar to the series. Man u should read the story properly before reviews.. U might be right about the execution thing. It isn't as smooth as I thought it to be. But it would be soon.

1yr

Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

I noticed how u just didn't respond about the age thing I wonder what you're gonna do about that. And you said that Nancy usually goes to school with her friend Barbra but I didn't say how cus there is no way they are walking to school is they live in the suburbs and the school is in the main town area so that's like at least 10 km

Mr_Flash_XO:I didn't mention barb's car.. I think u r just thinking it similar to the series. Man u should read the story properly before reviews.. U might be right about the execution thing. It isn't as smooth as I thought it to be. But it would be soon.

1yr

Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

you didn't say how*

Jonathan_Lam_2034:I noticed how u just didn't respond about the age thing I wonder what you're gonna do about that. And you said that Nancy usually goes to school with her friend Barbra but I didn't say how cus there is no way they are walking to school is they live in the suburbs and the school is in the main town area so that's like at least 10 km

1yr

Mr_Flash_XOAuthor

the reason I didn't reply about age was cuz I don't plan to change the age.. Just read the story.. Moreover i think u r wrong about the suburb and all.. You do realise that Mike and Nancy both go to same school in the series. Mike and his gang bike there.. There is a reason why I did the age thing. You won't understand it now but u will if u would continue reading the story. If u don't want to read it, then don't I guess.

1yr

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