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Review Detail of Febfew in HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken

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Febfew
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For those who don't know, this fanfic will have yuri around chapter 70~80. As the author did the great favor of NOT warning something so simple I'm doing it.

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HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken

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Outmane_Ab
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An unrealistic harem, and your claim to stuff the harem is useless shows that you are only seeking fame and a large number of followers instead of writing a realistic novel with drama and enthusiasm, and not making MC superior in everything, but rather strategic and other things like other players, and it seems that you do not know anything about strategies, wars, and politics, haha, because you will know even an experienced person. He will be wrong and may die, and even the strong without intelligence will die because of the conspiracy of others

Pretending_Author:Hmm, maybe its out of nowhere for you specifically but I have stated multiple times there would be three love interests in this story and tagged this harem, there is 0 reason not to have a threesome when the MC has a harem. I would avoid the harem genre if I was you... but I guess there are just some people who enjoy the Pokemon harem kind of stuff where the MC just puts the girls on the shelf and ignores them while he focuses on new conquests.
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Pretending_Author
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When I call girl x boy x girl yuri in my other fic I got 13 0ne star reviews saying I was baiting the yuri tag, when I don't tag it it seems people will do the same... Web Novel really got some top notch think tankers.

Febfew
FebfewLv10Febfew

I don't care about other people's mental illness. If it was tagged Yuri there's no reason why anyone would complain that it obviously has Yuri. But this fanfic DIDN'T have it and that's why I came to read it, and that's why I was annoyed when Yuri came out almost out of nowhere after 40~50 chapters and was fulfilled in chapter 79~80... (google translate)

Pretending_Author:When I call girl x boy x girl yuri in my other fic I got 13 0ne star reviews saying I was baiting the yuri tag, when I don't tag it it seems people will do the same... Web Novel really got some top notch think tankers.
Pretending_Author
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Hmm, maybe its out of nowhere for you specifically but I have stated multiple times there would be three love interests in this story and tagged this harem, there is 0 reason not to have a threesome when the MC has a harem. I would avoid the harem genre if I was you... but I guess there are just some people who enjoy the Pokemon harem kind of stuff where the MC just puts the girls on the shelf and ignores them while he focuses on new conquests.

Febfew:I don't care about other people's mental illness. If it was tagged Yuri there's no reason why anyone would complain that it obviously has Yuri. But this fanfic DIDN'T have it and that's why I came to read it, and that's why I was annoyed when Yuri came out almost out of nowhere after 40~50 chapters and was fulfilled in chapter 79~80... (google translate)
iLoveSex
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Very thanks, Dropped