I think you can understand the general meaning of my text even using Google Translate. Basically all nations had losses in the third war, but Konoha had two disastrous massacres for its military capacity without any nation lifting a finger.

I hope this Hiruzen is 100% of the original, with the exception of the skills. In fact Hiruzen is so incompetent, Danzo so crazy and Itachi so blind that if it weren't for the script Konoha would have been eliminated with absolute certainty after the massacre of the Uchiha clan. The argument is very simple and logical: remember the succession of public displays of weakness and massive losses after Sakumo's suicide, the third war, the Hyuuga incident, and the massacre caused by the Kyuubi with the death of Minato and Kushina, now add the Uchiha massacre and Konoha is so weak that Iwa or Kumo can destroy it. And then comes the second point, most of these losses were caused without any of the other major nations losing anything or losing something insignificant (Hyuuga case). Because of minor things nations invade others in the real world, Kishimoto created a volcano in the script in favor of Konoha and even put some logic into this collective attitude so bizarre that the story involving the Uchiha.

It's pathetic to see people defending Tobirama and Hiruzen with a thousand useless arguments. Hashirama himself was against what Tobirama did regarding the police. And Hiruzen didn't do anything decent when Danzo tried to kill him after Minato's death. In fact Hiruzen was so incompetent, Danzo so crazy and Itachi so blind that if it weren't for the script Konoha would have been eliminated with absolute certainty after the massacre of the Uchiha clan. The argument is very simple and logical: remember the succession of public demonstrations of weakness and massive losses after Sakumo's suicide, the third war, Minato's death and the massacre caused by the Kyuubi, add the Uchiha massacre and Konoha is weaker than Iwa and Kumo. Because of minor things, nations invade others in the real world, Kishimoto created a volcano in the script in favor of Konoha and even put some logic into this bizarre and stupid collective attitude.

This fanfic is good, but it's almost 100% AU. Kurenai, Anko, Sakura, Temari, Madara's Mangekyou, Hashirama's cells, Hashirama himself, Uzumaki Mito. All of this is AU in this fanfic and most likely Itachi will be too. The MC's strength is also ridiculous, but the problem lies in the ease that the MC has with Fuinjutsu. And then comes the biggest problem of all: this fanfic will only end in about 5~10 years at this rate, if the author doesn't die or abandon it like he did with several fanfictions before this one.

Sorry man, but the original shows that Minato was a genius above Itachi. It shows that Minato participated in the Second Ninja War even though he was very young, implying that he graduated from the academy very early. And he likely lost his original genin teacher and team in that war, making Jiraya and the team shown in the anime (in a photo) as his second team.

No!

Thank you for the chapters and keep up the pace of releasing chapters.

Please translate chapters at a faster pace, it's too slow.

Author, lightning rods don't work against Raiton jutsus (lightning release) or the cloud village wouldn't exist...

The story is good, just be careful please.

Author, you are either being too detailed or filling the chapters with nonsense. Half of the description of the Wheatland festival is useless for the fanfic story, in fact it only has negative points as it breaks the pace of the story and makes it very slow. And the battle scenes you did before, you can't visualize almost anything, it's as if you were "seeing" two people discussing Modern Art with each other...

Wow 😄 😄 😄 thanks for the chapter!!!

The story is very good, one of the 5 best in Naruto for me, but if it continues like this the author will die of old age before the fanfic reaches the beginning of Shippuden...

Land of Wheat or Land of Rice? I think you are confusing the author.

MC with three tomoe Sharingan and using clone, when genjutsu is cheaper and would have greater benefits for a genin. The author created a protagonist with serious brain problems.

Basic errors involving timeline, sharingan, elements, chakra and jutsus. Remembering that the Sharingan has 3 INNATIVE abilities. Can improve: yes, but they remain INNATIVE skills! I'm making a prediction that the author will get lost in his own plot. Errors are human, but when it comes down to it, it's a joke...

More mistakes: lack of knowledge of the Sharingan. A genjutsu intended for genin would not have this effect on a Sharingan 3 tomoe user. Even if he is a genin, genjutsu is one of the 3 innate abilities of the Sharingan, even if the user does not train genjutsu, at the very least he is good enough for his ninja rank.

I'm already starting to feel frustrated with the story. These are errors so basic that they leave room for major errors in the script. And Earth is vulnerable to lightning. Example: Kakashi vs Kakuzu...

Google translator.

Author, your story had a lot of potential but it has a lot of mistakes: extremely powerful MC from the beginning, to have Esdeath and Akame in the harem it is mandatory to be brainwashed or to implode the story, Leone using her body to get information, addition of a powerful sword for MC. The story development is very forced and the characters are not being portrayed correctly. Other than that, the rest is ok. I very much doubt that this story will be successful, because its current decisions will make the public uncomfortable with changes that don't make sense and will continually create errors in the script. This isn't the first time this has happened, it's common and it always ends with the author or the audience abandoning the story.