Throw your novel in the garbage, all you are doing is stuffing the MC with Megumi and it is useless. A story copied from a manga. No fun, no imagination. Fuck you for wasting my time.

Logically, when you see something supernatural and you fear for your life, like any other person, you will run away and leave those with you, but no, because MC is a hero, he must help everyone because he is perfect, haha.

This is annoying. The mc doesn't make much sense and you want to make him the original like yoji. This is bad

It was better to make him gray as long as he could. It would help, but not blindly

Directly, MC is depressed, evading reality, and just a failure

What is this stupidity? Isshiki's technique doesn't work. That's what he told you. Meteor returns it to Madara

An unrealistic harem, and your claim to stuff the harem is useless shows that you are only seeking fame and a large number of followers instead of writing a realistic novel with drama and enthusiasm, and not making MC superior in everything, but rather strategic and other things like other players, and it seems that you do not know anything about strategies, wars, and politics, haha, because you will know even an experienced person. He will be wrong and may die, and even the strong without intelligence will die because of the conspiracy of others

Another novel goes down the drain because of his contradictory morals, he is a hired killer and suddenly he doesn't want to kill, and so on

Things have become just the fulfillment of the readers' desires, such as helping Naruto, such as protecting those close to him. Little by little, things will become the fulfillment of their emotional desires for a son or another curse.

I will tell the truth, your story is a failure by all standards, and sorry, I am not embarrassing you or anything like that, but your writing and thinking are not appropriate for the Game of Thrones, so it is better to see an anime or novel without a goal or with a slightly peaceful world so that your hero is stupid and easy to obey like a sheep.

He is not androw so he is not indebted to anyone

A failed novel in every sense of the word. You are taking the novel A Song of Fire and Ice as a joke. How a dragon will rule the world. Even Tagiryan did not say this, and the whole world is plans, conflicts and betrayals. Go burn this novel. It is better.

Stupid

Stupid scenarios and stupid talk show the superficiality of the author

In fact, the third prince is the best mc without plot armor or cheating, just his intelligence and personality will fit the world. Unfortunately, the author has a different opinion.

He did not kill a single human, but only mutants and he can still make his own organs. These words and this childish view of the world and humans are bad, especially in a crazy world and the importance of humans is close to zero. Instead, I see humans, because of their weakness and lack of any way to change reality, consoling each other because they do not They can rest alone and with themselves, but like ants whose path is crossed, they turn around and because of their inability they just return and do not care much

A novel that does not have any challenge, frankly. Everything he wants he gets in an easy way, and whenever he says I have a deficiency, a coincidence comes to show him that he can improve himself with it like this fruit. He wanted a solution to the seventh area of ​​his mind. Boom, he got the mind fruit. Hahaha, this is disgusting. There is no excitement. Suspense and fighting for resources

A novel that does not have any challenge, frankly. Everything he wants he gets in an easy way, and whenever he says I have a deficiency, a coincidence comes to show him that he can improve himself with it like this fruit. He wanted a solution to the seventh area of ​​his mind. Boom, he got the mind fruit. Hahaha, this is disgusting. There is no excitement. Suspense and fighting for resources

What a farce this is when he associates himself with people who are less than him while he aspires to freedom. This is hypocrisy that has become restricted by feelings and duty. This is stupidity on the part of the author.

Everything is good except for MC, because he is a hypocrite. He took a person with a thunder build and experimented on him and studied him, which led to him getting a violent response, even though he is not evil and just ambitious like anyone in the world, and everything is normal for MC. He was made the prince of an empire because he has a thunder build. By force, he hunted him and almost died in his hands. Why? For no reason because he wants to study its structure. So, in one of the chapters, he hears about making girls into prostitutes, and he becomes upset about it, as if he is an honorable and good person, and he says that he is not good, but there is a limit. Rather, he is just a damned womanizer, my brother. He even killed those who had no fault of his own, and here he is being hypocritical. He has limits. The author is a failure. Really, in creating a character that everyone loves, it's just a hypocritical character. This is your weakness. If you set standards for the family, then this is good, but you change the standards of his character according to your head, and this is bad. For example, in the novel A Magician in the World of Magus, he was a real gray. He would be brought back if he could. He would not sympathize with He did everything for his progress and others. He had clear standards. He would not put his life in danger for anyone, no matter who he was, and he did not sympathize with anyone, even if he did sympathize, it would be normal. He would not carry that in himself.