Review Detail of alika_maisuradze in HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken
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The story has an interesting idea, but please explain to me why spoil it with stupid magic and Deus ex machina ??? The author, do you really not have a normal Fantasy or are you just writing trash stories?
HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken
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Yes, I think I missed the part where you said it was not serious. by stupid magic, I mean any magic that goes beyond the original world conceived by the author, i.e. Martin
Pretending_Author:You seem to have missed where I said I am writing this for my own enjoyment and I wont be taking it seriously. Also dragons are magic itself given form and you are reading a story about dragons of your own doing...image
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Water bending is literally in the source material, the shimmer is just an infinite drug buff its honestly not that bad to be honest.
alika_maisuradze:Yes, I think I missed the part where you said it was not serious. by stupid magic, I mean any magic that goes beyond the original world conceived by the author, i.e. Martin
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Pretending_Author:Water bending is literally in the source material, the shimmer is just an infinite drug buff its honestly not that bad to be honest.