Review Detail of Dalurino in Mountain with a Soul
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The review may change over time, I will add it to my library for future chapters.For me in the first era, the protagonist does not fully know how to develop, why he did not think of the supernatural before, he himself is a form of the supernatural. There are passages in the book that I find a little rushed, I'm not used to giving my opinion, I hope this opinion will allow you to improve your book a little bit, I did the best that I can, I don't speak English, I'm writing this review in French, sorry if you don't understand very well.
Mountain with a Soul
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Because supernatural didn't exist in the first era. At all. I am pretty sure I put a few mentions of it during the first era. I thank you for your review and hope that after you read the second era then you'll like it more. The reason for the first era that it seemed rushed is that there wasn't anything to offer. MC himself knew about the world and random explanations of technology would be just filler. Humans also couldn't give him any substantial help due to their limited lifespan.