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Thank you , for the chapter my bro
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😂😂 they like doing this in Chinese novel
"Besides our Hua Country, demon kings have appeared in eight of the countries corresponding to the other eleven states. Some demon kings have disappeared after their appearance, while others have attacked humans on a large scale. The most unlucky one is the United States." - Dalurino1mthCommentedCh 455 Chapter 250: Continuing to Fuse Bloodlines
- Dalurino2mthCommentedCh 579 New Era, Heavenly Dao Race
- Dalurino2mthCommentedCh 570 Saving the Immortal Dao
- Dalurino2mthCommentedCh 522 Chapter 171: Two Peculiarities! The Doomed Cultivation Realm! (10,000-word Chapter!) _5
- Dalurino3mthCommentedCh 480 Chapter 164: Cai Yonglong's New Golden Finger! The Upper Realm Imperial Clan! (Big chapter of 10,000 words!)_5
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In my opinion Ephon should stay on his territory because his goal was to have a family, if you want to develop other parts of the world do it through his child who will travel all over the world, you change POV throughout time, from time to time to show the evolution of Ephon's territory and two or three chapters where Ephon would fight against a Powerful Gerrier. it is also necessary to put in place attempts by the 5 elders against the descendants of ephon. for example, in order not to involve the world government, the five elders will send powerful pirates in his son's path. if you could give Ephon or a member of his family a devil fruit it would allow them to have a place to train out of sight of the world government (like the mirror world where the fight between Luffy took place and Katakuri) and prepare for the great war, and for the last part ephon against ym sama would be good as a last arc to close the book.
Ch 8 Changes - Dalurino3mthCommentedCh 450 Mysterious Female Senior
- Dalurino3mthReplied to one_piece_2795Ch 450 Mysterious Female Senior
- Dalurino4mthCommentedCh 441 The Divine Tree Is Overbearing, Cultivating Both Dharma and Physique
- Dalurino4mthCommentedCh 150 HWI 150
- Dalurino4mthCommentedCh 14 Outer Sect Exam
- Dalurino4mthCommentedCh 93 Final Round(Part-6)
- Dalurino4mthCommentedCh 11 Married Life (1)