Review Detail of tom123456 in Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

finally, i dropped, MC and system are trash

U mind explaining why?

the system is weak, uninteresting and not developed (and rarely used), I think that the darkness of the world does not go well with the academies. and when his dark spirit saves him in battle and wants to land his enemies, he stops him because he is afraid of being punished by the academy (although he has the director's favors)

yeah he become more socially dumb than average 13 year old brats who never went out of their castel.. It just annoy me ... and the worst is he getting into trouble due to misunderstanding which he never clarify cause he is fking dumb and can't say the right word... I mean why fight happen cause some young master things he is after his girl but mc never even tried to clarify....

Also, I never understood why mcs don't just try to clear up misunderstandings, which could save the mc 99% of novel problems...

in the great words of Ryan George from Pitch Meeting "so that the story can happen"

Nah even if he clarified In that case the guy wouldn't have let go. He was jealous of Mcs talent and fame. And since the Mc is of a falling noble household. This guy wanted to crush him and get the some attention and fame.

The Mc doesn't have that much of a background or backup. And if the Mc wants to be free of the academy later he needs to accumulate more favors from the head master

I haven't read this novel yet(still deciding), but that forced scenario where they never try to talk and explain that they didn't want/know/like that stupid/idiotic girl in the first place is a big killer for novels in my opinion... it's like they expect you to have brain damage and just accept that someone would rather fight (possibly to the death) rather than just explain.

Us authors struggle with creating convincing plotlines a lot, so sometimes its just 'super easy, barely an inconvenience' if we create scenarios like this to kick start conflicts🤭