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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    plot is good but that's it. author write like some newbie author. most of development is cliche with typical xinxia stuff happening nothing new. everywhere mc goes cities wiped out or some village is going to be destryed for bulshit reason. so overall the character in this novel is more bulshit than average xinxia and logically population should be negative but well that's not the case for plot reason. mc grows way tooo fast for fcs sake and everything came to him way too easily like he get bulshit skills and cheat from no where . in just a month mc went from a mortal to powerhouse on the level of clan head. and too much bulshit plot happening around him. hope author grows in his second story.

    My Martial Spirit is Nanobot
    Eastern · Chaos_Gray
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    "I didn't expect I will create a new exclusive step technique by merging these two technique. Let's call it the wind step technique," Lin Lee muttered thoughtfully.
    My Martial Spirit is Nanobot
    Eastern · Chaos_Gray
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    omg how much cliche could this story get. atleast make some differece from typical chinese world and make people more sensible.

    Instantly appearing in front of the servant, amidst the changing expressions of everyone, Lin Lee punched his chest expressionlessly.
    My Martial Spirit is Nanobot
    Eastern · Chaos_Gray
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    a normal person would just reaveal that his martial spirit is not normal but actually powerfull in order to not get bullied and looked down. but alas this is just another cliche novel where author is finding a way to make more wrods. he coul go for kingdom building route that is perfect .

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 Martial Artist 6th Stage
    My Martial Spirit is Nanobot
    Eastern · Chaos_Gray
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    that's not a villain than.

    A villain who wouldn't think twice about slaughtering everyone to safeguard the people he cared about.
    Villain Simulator
    Fantasy · Autistically
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    is auther 13 year old. I mean I can't believe he talks about hypocracy of mc with such a hypocratic logic.

    That's why I liked villains.
    Villain Simulator
    Fantasy · Autistically
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    ok

    A/N: Sorry for the sudden time skip , felt like I have been waffling for a while now. Finally beginning the 'Oda Nobuna's ambition' main plot.
    Journey Through Fictional Realities.
    Anime & Comics · HungryMushroom
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    that's logicless

    This led him to believe that it might be the same for humans, and he got lazy without actually testing it out.
    Journey Through Fictional Realities.
    Anime & Comics · HungryMushroom
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    kill him

    Shui Wuya knew who the other person was when Dai Huabin said his name. He was Huo Yuhao's brother, and naturally, he wasn't interested in him.
    Douluo: Helping my ancestors ascend to godhood
    Anime & Comics · Un1que
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    so boring and cliche. even worst than original story. try some fking new thing already.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 : Fighting Mu She Alone
    Battle Through The Heavens: From the Insignificant to the Emperor[MTL]
    Anime & Comics · _Baki_MTL
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
    Shivam_Thakur_188321d
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    so clicheeee

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 : Treasure Hunting
    Battle Through The Heavens: From the Insignificant to the Emperor[MTL]
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
    Shivam_Thakur_188321d
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    how about going to kingdom building route with technology

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 : Killing Liu Xi
    Battle Through The Heavens: From the Insignificant to the Emperor[MTL]
    Anime & Comics · _Baki_MTL
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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      However, Douqi is much milder than Douqi.
    Battle Through The Heavens: From the Insignificant to the Emperor[MTL]
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    Replied to scarletking001
    Ch 280 Questions, Questions, Questions
    Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction
    Anime & Comics · Houssem
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    who tf talk like that in their chilhood

    "Mom, I understand how you feel, but I need to do this. I have a responsibility to protect this family, and I can't do that without proper training."
    OLD-WORLD EXTRA
    Sci-fi · GoldenStache
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    hinduism. it states hell is only temprory where soul with bad karma suffer their sentence before getting reincarnated.

    'I remember that some religion talked about reincarnation being a natural part of life…' 
    OLD-WORLD EXTRA
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    tooo slow ... toooo boring. toooo much same thing repeatation.

    Ch 5 Getting the Cursed Seal Use Command
    A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
    Anime & Comics · Hanma_Jack
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    Replied to Ethernal7

    修仙界苟着发育,武道界重拳出击

    Hide in The Immortal Cultivation World, Strike Hard in the Martial World
    Eastern · Cat Sheriff King
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    no original idea

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Adam and Eve
    What I become A God?
    Sci-fi · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Shivam_Thakur_1883
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    Ch 66 Chapter 66: Upgrades people, Upgrades!
    Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
    Fantasy · Chronicle27
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