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plot is good but that's it. author write like some newbie author. most of development is cliche with typical xinxia stuff happening nothing new. everywhere mc goes cities wiped out or some village is going to be destryed for bulshit reason. so overall the character in this novel is more bulshit than average xinxia and logically population should be negative but well that's not the case for plot reason. mc grows way tooo fast for fcs sake and everything came to him way too easily like he get bulshit skills and cheat from no where . in just a month mc went from a mortal to powerhouse on the level of clan head. and too much bulshit plot happening around him. hope author grows in his second story.
omg how much cliche could this story get. atleast make some differece from typical chinese world and make people more sensible.
a normal person would just reaveal that his martial spirit is not normal but actually powerfull in order to not get bullied and looked down. but alas this is just another cliche novel where author is finding a way to make more wrods. he coul go for kingdom building route that is perfect .
that's not a villain than.
is auther 13 year old. I mean I can't believe he talks about hypocracy of mc with such a hypocratic logic.
ok
that's logicless
kill him
who tf talk like that in their chilhood
hinduism. it states hell is only temprory where soul with bad karma suffer their sentence before getting reincarnated.