in fact, on some really interesting thing why not, but the MC stole 100% of everything the protagonist had, everything, even the girls, shit, there are so many women in this world, but just decide to steal these girls... if as if the mc targeted him directly, whereas with the mc's system, he could have had a lot of things, without stealing them from the latter, but no, he just followed the usual cliché , steal all the opportunities that the protagonist might have, even if the latter is of no use to him. and what annoys me the most is in relation to the girls, it's like png, if you respond in the same way as the protagonist, you obstruct their love, it's so ridiculous. In short, I didn't like it.

I completely agree with you, the mc had no conflict with the original mc, but decides to steal everything from him, despite the existence of his cheater system (which is rarely used well by the way), he steals these women (as if there were only these women in this world) add to that that they are all little girls (which makes the mc a pure pedophile...) steals all these opportunities future laziness, weeds , pills, knowledge, if as if he had a particular hatred towards him... in short, I also stopped at chapter 150 when he started to resemble these pokemons (ah I mean harem girls..)

My last Review of this novel! apart from the good start, the rest is not crazy. The author uses words too often in any way, as they lose their relevance (example of these words: curiosity, fear, admiration, excited, honesty, exaltation, prudence) he uses them far too often, and he put it where there is space, sometimes it just doesn't make sense, and other times it's just there to add more words. Talk about the mc, the more time passes the more we have the impression that he is older or older, he does everything possible to please these teachers and he is afraid of disappointing them, the more time passes the more shy he becomes and is afraid of defending this (especially women). talk about the mc's power level, the author begins by showing us how strong he is, fighting a former director, fighting one of the strongest men of the strongest family behind the academy of darkness, fighting dozens see hundreds of mystics, then the tournament between acadimia arrives and the mc has difficulty with simple students, because he does not have enough "experience", which of these students has fought someone of level of a director and came out victorious? who among them fought a first class mystic? and kill her?? who fought against 5, 10, 20 mystics and came out victorious?, then to make a tournament stupid logical he destroys the mc and makes it difficult for him against students... this infuriates me! A question Mr. author please why make a transmigratory mc and then make sure to make it as mature as possible, that's the point that bothers me the most!

You don't understand what I mean, I'm not saying that the mc shouldn't use his system to improve his spells or his level (intelligence), I wonder why he never improves if he doesn't use are system, for example, his first year, he had 25 magic trick and at the end he still had 25 (yes I understand that he did not have the opportunity to use his system to improve) but my question This is why he doesn't improve by training, certainly, he won't gain a +20 like with his system, but even a +1 is already not bad, yes he can improve these spells with his system but when he can why isn't he training for improvement, or am I supposed to understand that he is nothing without his system? in any case, I understand it that way, because without its system it doesn't improve much

In fact, if the mc said that he was just waiting until he had enough strength to not be afraid of anyone's revenge, before starting his revenge, I would have understood, the problem is, the mc has no such thinking, or very rarely, and on characters who were themselves used by others. I must admit that I commented out of frustration, it was a novel with a very good start, but there you go, too much was ruined, in my opinion if there were more people who would give more reviews constructive and ratings lower than 5*, the author would have been obliged to rectify certain plots, and work on them more. But I understand your desire to continue reading it and even enjoying it (I do the same), I just find it sad how the novel evolves.

Yes The world tradition is interesting, I agree with you. The MC, that's the whole problem with this novel, at the beginning, I almost wanted to say that he's a perfect MC, careful, intelligent, but the further the novel goes, the more his intelligence declines (or to put it more otherwise, the author transforms the mc into an idiot for the sake of the plot), because well we're not going to hide it, or at least 80% of the problems that the mc encounters come from his """"negligence"""". Another point that ruins the novel is mc's enemies, they plot against him all the time, create problems for him, try to reduce him to slavery, try to kill him, but the mc does NOTHING, yes NOTHING , because he doesn't have enough """""proof""""", if he was a normal person, without his system that allows him to become very strong quickly, he would have already become Céline's slave or of the teacher, or already kill.. Talking about strength levels, the mc CRUSHED the former director of dark academia, but he has problems when he fights students from other acadimia, but seriously? without forgetting that since he CRUSHED the former director, he has become much stronger, but he still has problems against students... level of force in this novel makes no sense, the author made him a cheater, but still lets him play with children... common sense in this novel does not exist, no one questions mc's power level (well, his power level rises and falls xd he easily fought the former director, he killed one of the most mystical strong from one of the most powerful families (Vermont), but he always has problems with students), when the director hears that the mc has killed one of the strongest mystics of the Vermont family, then the director expects that the mc has problems with a first year student, logic?? Good novel at the beginning YES, very good even, but more traditionally, it doesn't even deserve a star.

Splendid ?? Really?? if you have only read the beginning of the novel, I can understand your comment, but if you have read the whole thing, and you always leave this kind of comment, then I don't know what to say... A mc reduced to an idiot by the author, to facilitate all intrigues, a mc who lets it happen and who never takes revenge on those who cause him problems, who try to reduce him to slavery, who try to control him , because he doesn't have enough """proof""""... if it was done once or twice, I can understand, but... Until now, none of these real enemies have been dealt with. And the fact that he is a transmigrator was only intended to explain the system, because well at the beginning the mc was intelligent, but the more the novel progresses, the more mc's IQ drops, he acts more and more more like a child despite the fact that he is over 17 + his life before transmigration... Illogical power level, with mc's strength, he always has problems with students... while he had crushed a former director, I say CRUSH. The author made the mc super cheater, but lets him play with children and always have enemies with them... a great novel yes...

Stupid and trash novel, 100% the same plot repeated endlessly with increasingly high power levels, the human race is still in crisis (because it declared a war and it lost * 3), then the mc arrives and saves the human race and represses the other races (even the neutral ones), I would have liked the system to be more partial, he speaks of a system which represses evil, but the mc himself is the mc. here is the story of this novel.

Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else... Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!! So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.

Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else... Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!! So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.

Please explain to me

It's just ridiculous, he claims that he defends the weak, but when the strong of a clan, of a sect, of a family do something bad, he kills the entire sect, clan... moreover old to youngest, he keeps no one alive, a real psychopath, for one person he uprooted several families from oldest to youngest, no survivors... he releases a month chapter ~ 120 -> 160, the number of murders what he committed is just absurd... then he gets angry when others do the same thing, but he is GOOD the others are evil... I'm just fed up, murder after murder, when he was in the capital it's still going well, but since its release, there hasn't even been a day of rest, the plot doesn't stop for a second, every time as he ends with one clan another comes into play... the worst, the mc doesn't do it for his advantage (well if we forget the system) but hey this system is shit, it makes no sense, it supposedly rewards it for criminals but later, it's more about the strength of that person rather than the crime he committed, unless everyone is a criminal... another zero point is the power level, as long as the mc does not reach a cultivation rank or it is close, if as if these higher ranks do not exist, even if the capital is attacked he does not exist, then when the mc arrives at this level, you find them everywhere, if as if the world is adapted to the mc's level, and not the opposite, the worst its function even on mc's friends, a month rather are lvl 10 (after 10/20 years cultivation) a month later they are lvl 50... the logic... Well the romance, I don't really know, when I stopped (chapter 163) the mc starts to get interested, but before that it was horrible... and of course it's another shitty harem, for not to change... I liked it at first, but since it came out, it was just horrible, there's no time to breathe, it's getting to the point where I was just tired of reading it, 40 chapter of pure combat and shitty plot, and it was a 10,000 word chapter...

I'm not going to defend the novel, especially this plot linked to the empress, it's just endless, 40 very long chapters or more (I gave up when I saw that mc's friends were catching up while they were absent ...) Finally, to return to your criticism, she tested the fruit to see if the fruit is poisonous, and the result is No, because they used a special poison that has the same attributes as this fruit, and 2, she does not I didn't have much choice. but I can understand your disgust, before your trip people of king rank are extremely rare, even the emperor only sent one practitioner of first king rank, but a few chapters later, the king rank became rare , every chapter there are at least 2/3 who die... if the king ranks are also present, why does the Emperor send only one first level king? it makes no sense, the only explanation is that the mc at that time was not yet strong enough, so the author limited the emperor's escort, which I find ridiculous and stupid... but in short the point that disgusts me is the fact that mc's friends are catching up with him, the king level has become just your average rank where everyone can accidiate with ease, whereas before his fate for this trip we knew not even the name of this rank.

yes yes... a paragraph above he says that and here the mc starts to change his mind, it's so biased... And are they physical which offers great resistance to the negative effect have we forgotten? just because its arrgance to the author at that time? for me it's just badly done, I would have understood, if it started a long time ago, but the same chapter talks about the negative effects (what are physical and the spell that Master Heinz has specially created to fight against it) but we forgot everything...

"He was at least learning a lot in the Academy, so his resolve to disappear after he got back his Shadow was starting to weaken." Author you're not going to do if not? you keep telling yourself that you wanted to leave the academy, and then you just throw it away? honestly if you do it, I'll stop your novel straight away. I hate these authors who keep pushing an idea in the head of these readers non-stop for hundreds of chapters, then he cancels everything as if everything he had written before was there just to look pretty... "I hate these authors who keep pushing an idea in the head of these readers non-stop for hundreds of chapters, then he cancels everything as if everything he had written before was there just to look pretty..." I want to believe that These students are not very strong, but the last 3? we are talking about one of the most powerful academia... I don't know what the author is doing... not ranking it in the top 3 okay, but being ranked as one of the worst? I don't understand anything anymore, I don't know if the author wants to transform it into one of the weakest acadia, but it makes no sense, just none. This chapter sucks, I'm going to take a pose, it disgusts me... see you in a year maybe...

"He was at least learning a lot in the Academy, so his resolve to disappear after he got back his Shadow was starting to weaken." Author you're not going to do if not? you keep telling yourself that you wanted to leave the academy, and then you just throw it away? honestly if you do it, I'll stop your novel straight away. I hate these authors who keep pushing an idea in the head of these readers non-stop for hundreds of chapters, then he cancels everything as if everything he had written before was there just to look pretty...

Slave mc, a mc without a dream, a mc as strong as he is, he remains a weakling, weaker than anyone else, weaker than an inscete, a mc without self-esteem, a mc who does not shows that when he wears a mask, a mc who does not assume. I would much, much, much prefer any brainless, stupid arrogant mc to this mc. a cowardly guy, a guy who likes to be trampled. A masochistic author, he never trusted his mc, he NEVER describes her as strong, every time he belittles him, he keeps saying how weak the mc is, despite the fact that he is one of the strongest people in the sect. he likes to trample on mc, he likes to write like intimidated inscetes are mc, and this mc lets it happen, he likes to describe how he is a slave to everyone. In short, there's nothing I like about this guy NOTHING (yes I liked the fact that he was discreet at the beginning, I still like him to be discreet, but discreet doesn't mean leaving it use and walk on it by everyone). Worst author, EVER I will read another one of these novels, EVER! (Why the 3 stars? because he still dares to delete negative reviews, Yes, they are without shame. AND yes I'm angry, I'm disgusted! I read chapter 1053 and so far he has only been belittling, the author keeps describing him as weak... even though he is one of the strongest people in the sect, even in the world, there is not much that is really a threat to it, apart from the immortals, but their number is so small that it is negligible...)

Is there a point that bothers me a bit? If the mc participates in the competition between academies, and he meets a real opponent, his would like to say that these students have the same level as the Director of the dark academy? (for information, the dark academy is considered as one of the most powerful academies, at the same time it still has to resist several academies at the same time) if this is really the case, then it would not make sense, in the otherwise the participation of mc (for us readers) would not make sense either. because for the first case, it makes no sense that students have almost the same level as an academy director and what is more is one of the strongest academies, from our point of view, if the mc is there just to crush them, it's a bit without suspense. I believe that the author has improved are mc much too quickly. Moreover, one last point the students who had to participate should not be from 4th year (and this is a special case, otherwise they should not participate so early) but already in 2nd year he is already preparing the participants, this which I find weird.

he decided not to return to the room anymore, or to put it another way, if he did, no one would be, suddenly there would be no problem related to his, but the author in his great generosity decided to make sure that the mc faces it from the outside, so that it can create useless problems, to be able to create a related plot, a plot that could easily have been avoided, a stupid plot, certainly, a plot that is not very thoughtful, an intrigue... but here it is, the author has chosen the path to facilitate it...

I agree on everything except the system, even if the system is not crazy, without it the mc is just useless...