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MMan1175
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2024-09-23 01:46

Starts out ok but quickly goes downhill. The original starting point is clear and conflict is well defined. However that is quickly abandoned for empty reasons. Some other reviewers say that the mc isn’t op must be of the opinion that only god is op. He has to go to a four year school yet got to the top of everything surpassing the fourth year students in half a year, I think. The author has a problem keeping track or at least mentioning how long it is between scenes. There were several times where it sounded like it was days or weeks only to mention that the mid year tests were right around the corner. Then he gets involved with the military of an allied nation and becomes the cornerstone of a 250+ unit in a couple of weeks, again I think because of the author’s inconsistent timeline, boosting the power of a fringe unit to an elite one within that time. All of the “relationships”, which seem to be a main point of the story, ring hollow as there is a clear declaration from more than a few that it’s all because of his ability to boost others but it’s kind of needed since the mc is very hollow himself. All in all this seems to be trying to be a few things but just ends up being not that good at any of them.

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