MMan1175

The title has nothing to do with what’s actually written. The story starts off pretty generic but is well developed and the characters are reasonable, for awhile. Around chapter 120 the mc starts acting completely different. There’s no real explanation for it. It almost feels like a new author took over or something. It’s just weird. My advice is to skip it.

I thought he only had like 4 which would only last for 8 minutes. He already blew 10 minutes killing the first few. Why did the ghost king wait to absorb the throne till it got within striking distance of the mc? There are just too many inconsistencies to stay on this story. I’m done with it.

Take what you can get.

A rushed mess. The conflicts are so contrived that I can’t take it seriously. The story seems to be trying to be funny most of the time and it just makes the sudden serious portions jarring rather than engaging. It seems to me that there is no real plan even this early in the story. That never bodes well for any future development. It’s just a thrown together mess.

An interesting opening but the quality drops after awhile. The biggest strength of this piece is the crafting but it becomes more and more of an afterthought. I understand and appreciate that the mc has relationships and other things to consider but I expect the mc of a piece called god of crafting should put the priority on creating. There are probably about the same number of chapters about porn and crafting. The mc starts out interesting but starts making less sense as he “develops”. By around chapter 150 he’s a caricature of himself. Rather than grow or mature he becomes more of a child.

Cardboard?

Don’t feel bad. A lot men have performance issues.

If a prototype looks good you missed the point of a prototype and wasted a lot of effort.

Ok I’m done. The reinforcement taking just a few minutes is convenient but not terrible. The stove upgrade taking half a day while the door took 12 days just proves a lack of planning and lazy plot armor.

The world is interesting but the characters are hollow and the system is inconsistent. Sometimes the system can reinforce things can are weeks but when needed it suddenly takes minutes. As near as I can tell the author is just making it up as they go and lacks any plan.