MMan1175

That’s a contradiction to what he said before, that the smoke mission didn’t create anything and only helped to point the way.

What? Did the bird ride the fish too?

TLDR: An interesting opening that can’t sustain itself and gets boring after too long. Translation Quality: 3 stars Inconsistent names and various other things means I can’t give too high a score. Update stability: 5 stars It’s finished so I’m defaulting to 5. Story development: 2 stars This is one of those everything gets handed to the mc stories and I’m not a fan. Originally the mission rewards would appear naturally as a result of the mission but eventually that connection is lost and it starts making less and less sense. Character design: 2 stars The mc is mildly interesting but everyone else are just cutouts in the background. There are some characters that have more personality but they fade pretty quickly. World background: 3 stars Some things are interesting but the general set up doesn’t really make any sense under scrutiny.

That’s not what happed a second ago in the fight.

How did they dig it?

TLDR: the classic invincible hiding ability allows the mc to move through the world without really interacting with it. Translation Quality: 5 stars I haven’t gone too far but I didn’t see any issues what so ever. Update stability: 4 stars Good but too young to give full marks. Story development/ Character design: 2 stars each The perfect hiding ability of the mc means that he doesn’t really interact with the world and ends up feeling kind of off to me. World background: 3 stars Pretty average. Honestly almost too average for being from a demon point of view.

Everything and everyone I read was flat as a board. Thats bot simple that’s just bad.

TLDR: a simple first attempt at a story with a flat simple murder hobo for an mc. Translation quality: 4 stars Pretty good nothing too bad but occasional issues. Update stability: 4 stars Pretty good but too young to give full marks. Story development/ Character design: 1 star each Simple and flat. World background: 3 stars Pretty standard. Not good but not bad.

Flat mc.

Didn’t he explicitly say he couldn’t take one every day before because of the pill toxins?