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Monkiiiy
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2023-04-27 08:04

Writing is smooth with little to no grammer mistakes that caught my attention.Characters are nice but i feel like they crush on him really easily probably there are other reasons for that will be revealed later but still there couldve been more interaction between them before at least they realize they are smitten by him.Other than that i feel like pace is good with captivating writing style keep up the good work.

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UnholyGod
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Thank you for your review 🤩

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