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William_TexLv151yr
2023-07-09 03:48

Well time to get a review done on this book/novel/series. This book has a very simple ,but good premise. It starts with Allen playing a new game and meeting the seven sin sister as I like calling them. They become husband and wives in game. but outside the game they our total strangers. This starts slow as they build trust and know who they our. Allen past is very dark in my view. This give the MC why he nice but distanced at the same time. During this time the girls take a interest in Allen due to this. Now saying this as a quick summary of the start of the book. This book gives some good twist and turns. I mean that you don't see it coming sometimes shocking. this book also funny. there also good drama. the only con i see is not enough in real world time and see the character build from there. There is a lot in game but not in the real world yet. I do feel that the book is still building and needs more chapter/ word count. I do highly enjoy the book just needs more time to show the character building and development. This I feel is the only lacking thing is all. The fighting scene and the gore is spot on and the evil the writer is on point. This the review for now and will do another when there more chapter in the future thank you for this book and I really do enjoy the character. Team Zoe and Jane and Shea lol. review from Will and Barb

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UnholyGodAuthor

Thank you,Will 🤩. Yeah, I need more real life events 🤔

William_TexLv15

Yes some real face slapping like make his ex buddy jelly and his family. But we havenot gotten to his family yet

UnholyGod:Thank you,Will 🤩. Yeah, I need more real life events 🤔
UnholyGodAuthor

About his fam, not yet ☺️

William_Tex:Yes some real face slapping like make his ex buddy jelly and his family. But we havenot gotten to his family yet
William_TexLv15

You fiend lol

UnholyGod:About his fam, not yet ☺️
DisappointingMyBoyLv1

How many chapter have you read ?

William_TexLv15

All caught up why

DisappointingMyBoy:How many chapter have you read ?
DisappointingMyBoyLv1

Nah , just wondering if the author still doesn't show the real life events in recent chapters...

William_Tex:All caught up why
UnholyGodAuthor

It will come soon. I thought you guys prefer in game events than real life since this is MMORPG novel. But I was wrong. So yeah, I will write more in real life events in the future then 😊

DisappointingMyBoy:Nah , just wondering if the author still doesn't show the real life events in recent chapters...
Rhae_RyuLv1

you all should read this if you don't your a fool.

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