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ATrueOtakuLv151yr
2023-07-30 06:09

First review of mine and unsee what to write down so I’ll speak my mind about the story. Great story so far with interesting characters, going at a good pace. The only thing that I feel somewhat lacking might be the world/story of the game they are playing on and how it feels weird that the demon emperor is not like a last boss, instead is a constant antagonist trying to stop players. When he is a ‘emperor’. With this their actions seem similar to team rocket and their constant harassment to Ash. But in this instance succeeding and destroying the player base. However over all the story is really good and would recommend and the past of the MC is really interesting and would be interesting how it will affect more of the story. Furthermore maybe also include some past of the other FMLs and allow it to integrate into the story, that might make it more enriched.

Villain MMORPG: Almighty Devil Emperor and His Seven Demonic Wives

UnholyGod
4.7
1361 Chs

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UnholyGod
UnholyGodAuthor

Thank you 😊

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M_Black_2830
M_Black_2830Lv15

This is a great start for a very polished work. I am really enjoying the premise and look forward to future chapters.

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UnholyGod
UnholyGodAuthor

Shameless author review! I give this story 5* since I like how the MC act like a real villain in the game while he can mantain his ordinary life in real world. He is a complex individual who's both brutal and charismatic. I guarantee you will drawn to him despite his evil persona. He also cunning and have a lot of tricks. The romantic relationships and revenge will add extra layer to the story. There's also a lot of action, war and bloody scenes in this story. Overall, I believe you will enjoy this story 🤗 Note: There's no NTR or Yuri in this story. So don't worry 😉

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William_Tex
William_TexLv15

Well time to get a review done on this book/novel/series. This book has a very simple ,but good premise. It starts with Allen playing a new game and meeting the seven sin sister as I like calling them. They become husband and wives in game. but outside the game they our total strangers. This starts slow as they build trust and know who they our. Allen past is very dark in my view. This give the MC why he nice but distanced at the same time. During this time the girls take a interest in Allen due to this. Now saying this as a quick summary of the start of the book. This book gives some good twist and turns. I mean that you don't see it coming sometimes shocking. this book also funny. there also good drama. the only con i see is not enough in real world time and see the character build from there. There is a lot in game but not in the real world yet. I do feel that the book is still building and needs more chapter/ word count. I do highly enjoy the book just needs more time to show the character building and development. This I feel is the only lacking thing is all. The fighting scene and the gore is spot on and the evil the writer is on point. This the review for now and will do another when there more chapter in the future thank you for this book and I really do enjoy the character. Team Zoe and Jane and Shea lol. review from Will and Barb

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bess
bessLv14

omg there's only 16 chapters so far but Unholy-chan pulled me headfirst into a new world filled with fantasy, adventure and a healthy sprinkle of t+a (; really hoping this story continues to be as incredible as it is at the start and i shall be adding this novel to my "F5 Sect" list ^^ i'm really looking forward to seeing Allen level up his love life with plenty of wild play while exploring uncharted territories of this new virtual reality world with his wives xD i also badly want to see character growth both in vr and the real world. this type of genre is def one of my favorites!

1yr
Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceLv14

Just because its written No Ntr and No yuri among harem memebes/wives/lovers in synopsis, I directly give 5 stars. Mind it, I yet to read book so better check other reviews for more info.

1yr
Konrad_69
Konrad_69Lv4

A very interesting novel. I expected the usual ”mysterious game” done by some powerful strong alien organization kinda stuff but was surprised to see that it is focused on Real Life. A very interesting and unique novel.

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TheForgottenCrown
TheForgottenCrownLv3

From what I’ve read so far, the book is very good. It's just that the author did a good job of making Sofia annoying and hatable. Too good of a job qctually...

1yr
Deku_Hero_5330
Deku_Hero_5330Lv4

I usually don't read videogame novels because the heroine can do it there and still say they are v. but I think I'll give this a read if you spoil me about their past(in game).

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DarkFight3r
DarkFight3rLv3

The story is decent, but I dont like multiple MCs. Also quite a lot spelling mistakes. I‘ll continue reading but skipp the boring second main character (the „good guy“)

1yr
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

Reveal spoiler

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