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Monkiiiy
MonkiiiyLv31yr
2023-04-27 16:04

Writing is smooth with little to no grammer mistakes that caught my attention.Characters are nice but i feel like they crush on him really easily probably there are other reasons for that will be revealed later but still there couldve been more interaction between them before at least they realize they are smitten by him.Other than that i feel like pace is good with captivating writing style keep up the good work.

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UnholyGod
UnholyGodAuthor

Thank you for your review 🤩

Jonas_Dhbehf
Jonas_DhbehfLv1

can you give me the discord link of auto

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