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Zatio_Reidon
Zatio_ReidonLv1512mth
2024-04-19 07:42

The story started out pretty good, and then bad things happens and then while at boot camp nothing happens and suddenly brainwashing and a rebellion out of the blue and the ability to crush trained soldiers..sigh. This could have been great if there was space for growing a proper rebellion but no, it had to happen randomly out of the blue. The second the story no longer made any sense i lost interest in this. I rate the early part of the story as four stars, the boot camp part three stars and the rebellion one star. Not sure if the paid parts will be worth it, but i am not interested in finding out.

Smith and Wesen: A Modern Blacksmith's Magical Reincarnation

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ChellyArks
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Coyle
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The storytelling in this story is really clean; that is what surprised me the most. However, I got confused by the terms of the new world, Zahlers, Nenners, and Seigelwork. That is too much info for a world I barely know. Still, it seems like an enjoyable story overall.

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AYESHA_FAHIM
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I was engrossed in this book from the opening page. I was able to remain interested in the plot because of the compelling characters. The interesting plot had turns and turns that left me guessing right up to the very end. I was able to entirely lose myself in the novel because to the author's imaginative and detailed world-building.

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Caracas
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Just don't read this if you don't want to have an aneurism.MC's Father was brutally killed in front of his face and now he licking the ground where his father's killer is walking! and that's not all he is intimate with HER. Yes you read that right. Braindead simp MC. Don't waste your time with this.

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OrangeShotgun
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Burak_Ocak
Burak_OcakLv14

I went in thinking that crafting would be a Big part of the story. Doesnt Seem to be the case though just a gimmick We have seen so many times, that either gets forgotten or not used at all.

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krane99
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skoomahog
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I'm hooked, great story. sad I'm caught up in chapters and I have to wait for more. Great story and character progression so far. Great fight scenes with some funny parts. could use more snu snu with more details. I'm just asking for other people who are into that. cough cough

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Dubyas
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A very good novel, especially in the fantasy genre. While the Isekai tag is somewhat played out, this book takes a fresh look at the genre and breathes new life into it. The writing quality is absolutely perfect. No complaints from me. I never noticed any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes and I specifically seek them out. Each sentence flows smoothly and every paragraph feels well crafted. Story development is great. We are not treated to long and often overplayed stories of the MC's previous life (at least from what I have read) that can bog down the story. Character design is unique. The MC adapts well to his new environment, so while the trope is still there, it never feels overplayed or redundant. Most Isekai protagonists tend to annoy me, especially with their personalities. I am happy to report that Rex/Rouge never felt annoying. The world background is wonderful. I love all the European aspects that were taken from our world. I'm so used to seeing Asian influence that I was genuinely surprised to see very little to none of it. Over all, a very good book. I will be adding this to my library and I am excited to see where this goes. Happy writing, author.

2yr
SaraSaavedra
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I like your writing style. I've already read a couple of chapters and it's easy to get hooked on the story. I look forward to reading more of your work on the platform.

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