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Coyle
CoyleLv32yr
2023-03-15 08:52

The storytelling in this story is really clean; that is what surprised me the most. However, I got confused by the terms of the new world, Zahlers, Nenners, and Seigelwork. That is too much info for a world I barely know. Still, it seems like an enjoyable story overall.

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ChellyArks
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I'll get to writing some supplementary stuff on them eventually

Coyle
CoyleLv3

Good to know (:

ChellyArks:I'll get to writing some supplementary stuff on them eventually
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

thanks for the reviw

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