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Caracas
CaracasLv121yr
2023-06-21 02:28

Just don't read this if you don't want to have an aneurism.MC's Father was brutally killed in front of his face and now he licking the ground where his father's killer is walking! and that's not all he is intimate with HER. Yes you read that right. Braindead simp MC. Don't waste your time with this.

Smith and Wesen: A Modern Blacksmith's Magical Reincarnation

ChellyArks
4.3
602 Chs

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ChellyArks
ChellyArksAuthor

Didn't read past those few chapters, I see. That's not the case at all

1yr
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Caracas
CaracasLv12

Oh it's not? Thx. In the comment section there's a dude that said he's Mindcontrolled? So that's the cause. I won't and can't give this novel another chance just because of this. Even if it's not happening again that's all reason enough for people to drop this.

1yr
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mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15

oh it's better than that..after the MCs family is killed he is taken to be the servant/lover of said killer.But it's not that simple as the killer is a water user who brainwashed him violating both his mind and body.from then on (through 90 -the first volume)Our MC is a man plagued with Alzheimer's level mind disturbances. his close friends can only struggle with his fragmented memory and ruined potential Constantly reminding him of who he once was, as he endlessly apologizes for his memory lapses. There are hints that someday he'll receive the right stimulus or trauma that will restore his mind and power potential.I'd advise caution paying for this. Look at the chapter headings to get an idea how much filler is in each battle. Though heavy with character building, the concept and world building are not enough to ride the mental rollercoaster. such a good story concept in this world...when does he get his mind back???

Caracas:Oh it's not? Thx. In the comment section there's a dude that said he's Mindcontrolled? So that's the cause. I won't and can't give this novel another chance just because of this. Even if it's not happening again that's all reason enough for people to drop this.
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