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Rating: 5
Author: ODISSEU

ODISSEUAuthor2yr

2023-02-28 23:54

Unfortunately I put the work in the wrong place, I appreciate constructive criticism, and tip, English is not my first language, I use a translator.

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ODISSEU

4.5

1 Chs

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Sea_LightLv1

So who is the FL?

2yr

ODISSEUAuthor

FL?

Sea_Light:So who is the FL?

2yr

ODISSEUAuthor

Yelan Perhaps?...

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PkhtyVKJGUDkhLv12

from the cover i think i knew

ODISSEU:Yelan Perhaps?...

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Sea_LightLv1

Female lead bro

ODISSEU:Yelan Perhaps?...

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RyofuLv11

ODISSEU:Yelan Perhaps?...

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UltimateSenpaiLv4

I suggest that you better write your novel on google docs. save google docs in your google drive. it will definitely help you to correct the wrong sentence and words. and use grammarly app. Well, I'm just sharing my experience while writing novels.

1yr

ODISSEUAuthor

I managed to solve a part of this in the second volume.

UltimateSenpai:I suggest that you better write your novel on google docs. save google docs in your google drive. it will definitely help you to correct the wrong sentence and words. and use grammarly app. Well, I'm just sharing my experience while writing novels.

1yr

ODISSEUAuthor

Also, thanks for the tips.

1yr

SolrakRKLv13

author San, do you repost this? where is the name?

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