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Sea_Light3dCommentedYou're right, even though Shogun is a waifu, people seem to forget that she's an emotionless tyrant. And her personality is also very strange and confusing.
And just like that, the main 'villain' was suddenly a 'good character'. But because Ei had boobs, everyone accepted it.- Sea_Light6dReplied to Sea_Light
But in the end I only gave it 4 stars. Because the author has a strange typing habit, you always write " ?. ". If it is a question, use "?", otherwise use "." , no one will write them together. Although it's not a big deal, it can sometimes be uncomfortable to read. Finally, this review is written using Google translate, so please forgive me if there are things you don't understand. Thank you.
- Sea_Light6dReplied to Sea_Light
Another thing I agree with the author is the time it takes for the girls to develop feelings. I certainly don't want to read a story where a couple kisses and makes love in the first chapter. Why do people like such quick love? I want a romcom story where MC and FMC realize their feelings for each other at the end of the story. And this story pleased me very much.
- Sea_Light6dPosted
Hello author, I have finished reading the latest chapter of this story and wanted to leave some thoughts. First of all, I need to say that I've never played Genshin Impact before, but I have read so many fanfics of it that I can understand the setting and characters quite specifically. And from my experience, this is definitely one of the Genshin fics that makes me the most satisfied. As I said, about the plot, this story has a fairly slow pace, the characters that interact with the MC are very realistic, and the MC's personality is also quite interesting to me. Next is what most Webnovel readers are interested in: the Harem. This is definitely a very difficult topic to write about because the author needs to build the emotional path between the characters as logically as possible. There was even a reader who literally recommended 99% of the Genshin girls into the MC's harem. It's very cringe. In my opinion, A good harem is the harem with about 4-5 people, more than that will bore the readers.
- Sea_Light6dReplied to Na1gel
Yes, you're absolutely right. The guy above is literally me 1 year ago. At that time I was just a stupid kid who always talked about things like OP MC or mass harem,... After realizing how crigne I was, I gradually stopped commenting on webnovel, and at the same time I don't want others to repeat my mistakes.
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- Sea_Light14dCommented
I think the developers will favor Morax more because, you know, Liyue refers to China in real life, and Mihoyo is a Chinese company, so...
Ei stood silent, pondering. She had no confidence in beating Morax. She knew she wouldn't lose, but winning was another story. Still, her Mussou Isshin was extremely good against the Lord of Geo's shields, she could cut through everything, but Morax' ability to cause massive destruction was unparalleled. She couldn't fight him and protect Inazuma from hundreds of meteors. - Sea_Light4mthPosted
Not a fanfic but why you post it here? In fanfic section? ......................... ......................... ......................... .........................
This book has been deleted. - Sea_Light4mthCommentedCh 1 Green - 1
- Sea_Light4mthPosted
Me after reading the synopsis of Chinese novel Why the hell do people still want to translate bullsh!t stories like this? (no offense) ....
This book has been deleted. - Sea_Light6mthPosted
I know you mentioned this story on Scribble Hub but why did you arbitrarily change its name? To me this is nothing more than blatant copying, you didn't even leave any signs such as the author's name or the title of the original story. Even though you took credit for the story, the most important thing that you never asked the original author's permission. If I were him, I would be very disappointed and angry.
- Sea_Light7mthCommented
Wow you really put your heart into this story. Many authors don't even write 800 words per chapter, they just divide their work into small pieces to get more views.
In any case, this was quite a long one wasn't it? Approximately six thousand words! I mean holy shit! I'm sure I've been writing a lot of gibberish here and there. That's because I kinda grew impatient. Trust me. I'm also agonizing in anticipation on when I could write the finale.. - Sea_Light7mthCommented
I almost forgot that YamaGod can swim at the speed of light
"That's right. Something like that is nothing to me. I'm sure I can swim even faster than them." Yamauchi boasted. Everyone narrowed their eyes in reaction. - Sea_Light7mthCommented
They are wet
Hustler One glances at Leon's way, watching how he wipes the sweat from his face with the bottom half of his tank top. His sculpted and lightly scarred abdominals are shown, and for a moment the A.I's hardware suffers yet another benign glitch. It sees the same expressions on Clarice and Angelica's faces– even Olivia's, though the commoner girl is quick to recover before Leon notices. - Sea_Light7mthReplied to Bagyong_Pablo
Yeah, I like cool girls. Especially Clarice and Noelle in Otome Mob, I only regret that she is not main heroine, she impressed me a lot.
She's quick to the uptake and more than capable of taking over Hustler One's secretarial tasks– managing to not only streamline the various outlets and inlets of his burgeoning territory's funds but also drafts potential expansion plans that impresses even the A.I itself. It runs simulations based off of the information provided through its growing intelligence network and finds that Clarice's projections have an 78% accuracy rate give or take the potential for human error or outside interference; significantly greater than expected. - Sea_Light7mthReplied to BaaSheep123
This fic currently has more than 30 chapters :D
Running Away from Life - Sea_Light8mthCommentedCh 33 Chapter 29 - Bogus