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Veldaza
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2024-09-23 05:01

I don't normally write reviews, but this DESERVES one because I swear on all that is holy, that this is PEAK FANFICTION. author is legit blessed by God because there is no way he could make such a DIVINE piece of literature. I stumbled on to this by pure and sheer luck, and I thank the gods every day for showing me this godly fanfiction, THIS is what the minecraft movie should be like, and the fact that the author manages to post so often yet have such long chapters without compromising quality is beyond me, SURE the author DID use ai in the beginning BUT after chapter 30 or so he stops. author, you deserve a Nobel prize. (btw I occasionally find some small grammar errors so you should probably have someone read chapters before you release)

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Thank you for the great review, this made my day and encouraged me to continue:)

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