This novel is amazing, the best Minecraft fanfic I have ever read to date. The writing quality is good but some words and sentences are hard to read. But it is still readable, so a solid 3 star an extra star for an awesome Author. Updating stability is great keep it up, just don’t over do it so the quality won’t go down. Story development is top level, the MC is human and not a super genius with a photographic memory. He makes mistakes and he learns from them, kind of. He knows the world is real and if he dies, he dies and that’s it for him. So he is very careful. Character design: Who cares my imagination is better than some of the character designs. Most of the time. World background is surprisingly amazing like I did not expect it to be so good. Like for example the Iron golems can’t heal from the regenarstion potion, because they are not made of flesh. So the only way for them to heal is by giving them iron bars, so they could somehow make it apart of them and regenerate themselves. That’s what I took from the Authors explanation. And most of all the Author is very active since most of the time he responds to my shenanigans. Keep up the amazing work Author, you are the best and I will look out for your future works if you ever plan one.
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Is there kingdom building in this story?
No, the MC won't become a king.
