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Primordial_God
Primordial_GodLv68mth
2024-04-18 20:51

Although Story started great, it really has very bad English whicb makes me not want to read the following chapters. There are some typos but they are manageable. I request author to write in a better way so that we as readers can understand the ongoing plot.

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Ratnik
RatnikAuthor

I'm not a native English speaker. So I apologize for all the mistakes.

Primordial_Saiyan
Primordial_SaiyanLv4

Is MC reincarnated/isekai'd as Peter Parker or is it not a reincarnation fic? Coz judging from the title it certainly feels that way. Some other guy asked this question too, but you didn't answer. And I haven't started reading yet, so that's why I wanna know.

Ratnik:I'm not a native English speaker. So I apologize for all the mistakes.
Ratnik
RatnikAuthor

mc didn't reincarnate

Primordial_Saiyan:Is MC reincarnated/isekai'd as Peter Parker or is it not a reincarnation fic? Coz judging from the title it certainly feels that way. Some other guy asked this question too, but you didn't answer. And I haven't started reading yet, so that's why I wanna know.
Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4

hey man you can use grammarly premium for free just look it up hint:use 'cookie editor'

Ratnik:I'm not a native English speaker. So I apologize for all the mistakes.
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Have you writen +18 content in this novel yet ?

Ratnik:mc didn't reincarnate
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Please add x 23 in harem

Ratnik:mc didn't reincarnate
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Please add moaning sounds in lemons

Ratnik:mc didn't reincarnate
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

get help

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Please add moaning sounds in lemons
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

get help

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Please add x 23 in harem
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

get help

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Have you writen +18 content in this novel yet ?
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