Good start, only thing i dont like is that we still havent had jons snows POV and it seems like the plot i dragging on and could use a timeskip, reading about a baby isnt rlly that fun
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harem?
degenerate
Krassus_2:harem?
no, you misunderstood! Don't lump me in with those lowly harem-enjoyer scum! Just asking to avoid reading a book with harem in it.
ShuYme:degenerate
so can you, oh user who already read the story, give this lowly no harem sect-member an answer?
i haven't read it since iImade the review and at that point the mc was still a baby so iIreally don't know
Krassus_2:so can you, oh user who already read the story, give this lowly no harem sect-member an answer?
ah ok, thanks for your time👍
ShuYme:i haven't read it since iImade the review and at that point the mc was still a baby so iIreally don't know
Too many flashbacks. There are multiple flashbacks for each chapter and that becomes annoying after the first few chapters. It becomes confusing as many of these flashbacks contradict what was already written.
great start keep up
Overall a really fun story to read I'd recommend it Not perfect of course and has some cringe moments but all stories do Can't wait to read more of it
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I can’t wait to read the next chapter real soon
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