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yahska
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2024-02-25 22:23

Too many flashbacks. There are multiple flashbacks for each chapter and that becomes annoying after the first few chapters. It becomes confusing as many of these flashbacks contradict what was already written.

Dance of The Dragonwolf

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ShuYme
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Good start, only thing i dont like is that we still havent had jons snows POV and it seems like the plot i dragging on and could use a timeskip, reading about a baby isnt rlly that fun

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Mastarius
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great start keep up

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Overall a really fun story to read I'd recommend it Not perfect of course and has some cringe moments but all stories do Can't wait to read more of it

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I can’t wait to read the next chapter real soon

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